3/5/2008 c12 5HeatherLee
hey, i just finished your story and you need need need to update soon! now for your praise: the characters are becoming more defined and you are doing a good job with that, the descriptions of scenery are good, the plot is interesting even though it is a tad cliche (most romances are though so it isnt a bad thing). the only thing i would have to say was wrong was that Will and Emily didnt hate each other for long enough. i mean the first few encounters were rough but then you skip foward to the weekend and all of a sudden they are mortal enemies. then the accident hapened and it changed everything. i would either have them get into a bigger fight in the beginning and say nastier things to each other, or spread the eneminity (sp) out for a longer period of time. also, question: did Will stay with Emily the whole time she was at the hospital? i mean she woke up to him sleeping there and he said he hadnt eaten in a while so i could only assume he had been there a while but i wanted to know how long? thats all for now and in the future i'll comment on each chapter. good luck and update soon!

~Heather

12/27/2007 c12 1goodbyemylover
aww that was a really cute chapter!

i think every romance story needs to have a food fight of sorts, haha.

i'm so glad you updated, and i hope you update again soon!

12/26/2007 c5 1beautyleftthemblind
good

7/15/2007 c11 6NotMixedEqually
I really like your story! I love how you write. You write characters really well. Update soon, please!

7/15/2007 c11 1goodbyemylover
wow, scott is a jackass.

i'm really glad emily and will are getting somewhere though.

keep up the great work!

4/19/2007 c10 2kandyrq
oh, i bet emilys hating herself right now, love the story by the way! update soon!

4/18/2007 c10 3White Rabbit Tale
I am really liking this story and I'm really happy that you finally updated, but I think you're a little confused about shot glasses. They are tiny. Beer is not a pungent form of alcohol. It is usually no more than 5% alcohol. Drinking four shots of beer will not get even the most lightweight drinker drunk. Four shots of vodka or tequila, sure. And for the record, I know of exactly zero people who will literally have no recollection of their actions while drunk. People don't usually forget completely.

Anyway, I like the suspense at the end of the chapter and I am very interested to see what will happen next. Will is quite a cutie and I can't wait until they start having more flirtation and sexual tension. Best part of any romance story.

I hope your next update comes soon!