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2/15/2010 c1 Icyfire4w5
1) Hohoho! I'm in the mood for some dark stories now, and I enjoy yours because it's about a stalker and his prey.

2) I've seen a typo somewhere-"the eighth", not "theeighth".
6/9/2006 c1 5Nikki the Hypie
This is a great, albeit horrific story. I love that Sasha is so tortured, because it's so real. I almost went through the exact same thing a couple years ago. Always insecure. After a while I was a really angry teenager. Now I've mellowed out and am comfortable with myself, but I can relate to Sasha's insecurities. And the ending, the metaphor hidden between the lines; how she destroyed herself. It's almost poetic. Nicely done. This deserves more reviews. And it's very, very well-written. Kudos!

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