for Just Take It1/18/2007 c1 
20Once in a blue moon
Just 'suggestions' of rape and abuse?
Very vivid, well written. The first paragraph (however "morbid", as you say), is really almost poetic in the way you wrote it.
Although a distressing suject matter, way to go for getting him back. Good short story, in its own way.
20Once in a blue moonJust 'suggestions' of rape and abuse?
Very vivid, well written. The first paragraph (however "morbid", as you say), is really almost poetic in the way you wrote it.
Although a distressing suject matter, way to go for getting him back. Good short story, in its own way.
4/18/2006 c1 25pandaluv11
Wow, that really is morbid. lol
You're writing is really good. Very well developed. And the end is awesome!
Keep up the good work!
25pandaluv11Wow, that really is morbid. lol
You're writing is really good. Very well developed. And the end is awesome!
Keep up the good work!