5/11/2009 c1 7Kit-Kat Punk-lover
That was dreadful and depressing T.T. Well-written and such, but put me into a sad state. The sad part is that some girls are really that blind and would do that :(.
That was dreadful and depressing T.T. Well-written and such, but put me into a sad state. The sad part is that some girls are really that blind and would do that :(.
4/20/2009 c1 1love and misadventures
I wonder if eyelashes can grow back? God, if a guy did that to me, I'd kill him...
I wonder if eyelashes can grow back? God, if a guy did that to me, I'd kill him...
1/28/2009 c1 22effervescent-sentiments
Very chilling. I love the last line, what he says. I can almost hear the cold, high-pitched laugh. Oh, man. Great writing.
Very chilling. I love the last line, what he says. I can almost hear the cold, high-pitched laugh. Oh, man. Great writing.
1/28/2009 c1 2poppiesinoctober
I don't know what to say. I really like this.
It's very, um, I don't know. I just, wow.
I'm speechless, you could say.
You really should write more one shots.
Or horror movies, or something like that. You would be very good at it, that's for sure.
I don't know what to say. I really like this.
It's very, um, I don't know. I just, wow.
I'm speechless, you could say.
You really should write more one shots.
Or horror movies, or something like that. You would be very good at it, that's for sure.
1/22/2009 c1 2codyismypup
Absolutely brilliant, but I'm not surprised. Well, not because of the story, but that you wrote it. I have very high expectations of you.
Oh, wow. Just...phew. I loved the concept. That girl was definitely in a lose-lose situation, unless of course, she stabbed him instead and told him 'how's that for pretty' or something.
Damn, what a ba.sta.rd, and what a low self esteem (in love) girl.
Disturbing. But hell, I always expect that from you as well. You should write horror movies, stuff that I'll never be able to watch because I'm easily traumatized-by movies.
ugh -shudder- I almost have a bad taste in my mouth and all I can imagine is a girl cutting her eyelashes off to the skin ughughugh.
It was amazing. Talk about 'Love me dead' (by ludo)
Absolutely brilliant, but I'm not surprised. Well, not because of the story, but that you wrote it. I have very high expectations of you.
Oh, wow. Just...phew. I loved the concept. That girl was definitely in a lose-lose situation, unless of course, she stabbed him instead and told him 'how's that for pretty' or something.
Damn, what a ba.sta.rd, and what a low self esteem (in love) girl.
Disturbing. But hell, I always expect that from you as well. You should write horror movies, stuff that I'll never be able to watch because I'm easily traumatized-by movies.
ugh -shudder- I almost have a bad taste in my mouth and all I can imagine is a girl cutting her eyelashes off to the skin ughughugh.
It was amazing. Talk about 'Love me dead' (by ludo)
1/11/2009 c1 5Vii-Rain
MY GOD! I swear I was ready to kill the bastard when I finished reading this. This chapter really sent pangs to my heart. If this is a true story...which I hope not...kill him for me...and if not..lets hope no one thinks to do this to ANY1!
:D
MY GOD! I swear I was ready to kill the bastard when I finished reading this. This chapter really sent pangs to my heart. If this is a true story...which I hope not...kill him for me...and if not..lets hope no one thinks to do this to ANY1!
:D
12/19/2008 c1 1dyingimmortal
Okay, that was really messed up... though that's why I liked it. :]
Poor gullible girl.
Okay, that was really messed up... though that's why I liked it. :]
Poor gullible girl.
12/3/2008 c1 2Tendrils-of-Insanity
wow that was disturbingly amazing if you know what I mean :P very creative
wow that was disturbingly amazing if you know what I mean :P very creative
12/2/2008 c1 Alyssa
I love this,
He's evil. She's gullible.
Twisted ending, I love this :)
I love this,
He's evil. She's gullible.
Twisted ending, I love this :)
11/5/2008 c1 20Maggie Summers
That was...scary. Beautifully written, but scary. How can anyone get to be so malicious and evil?
Wonderful and twisted. I'm now hyper-aware of my eyelashes, if that's possible :)
-Maggie
That was...scary. Beautifully written, but scary. How can anyone get to be so malicious and evil?
Wonderful and twisted. I'm now hyper-aware of my eyelashes, if that's possible :)
-Maggie
10/4/2008 c1 Lovedward48
Nice thought you had there! It's intriguing! I like the way you wrote it! Very well done! :)
Nice thought you had there! It's intriguing! I like the way you wrote it! Very well done! :)
8/24/2008 c1 Angelic Hellraiser
Oh! Burn bitch!
Some girls can be so damn gullible!
This was wickedly delicious! :D
Oh! Burn bitch!
Some girls can be so damn gullible!
This was wickedly delicious! :D