4/18/2006 c1 Camisado
Wow. So amazing. You truly astound me. Your words are just so ... i can't describe how great they are.
But ... is there something deeper behind this ... maybe a moral of some sort. Because, people, in their own perfect ways, will do almost anything ... change almost anything ... to fit in with people around them; people that don't even truly care about them?
Hmm ... even still. Amaze.
Wow. So amazing. You truly astound me. Your words are just so ... i can't describe how great they are.
But ... is there something deeper behind this ... maybe a moral of some sort. Because, people, in their own perfect ways, will do almost anything ... change almost anything ... to fit in with people around them; people that don't even truly care about them?
Hmm ... even still. Amaze.
4/18/2006 c1 1DuchessYappingDog
Aw. That's so sad. I always hope that there's going to be a happy ending, but I guess it was pretty clear that he was a butthole from the beginning. I thought he wanted to her to do something scandelous in front of a crowd, but this is even worse. Sigh.
Aw. That's so sad. I always hope that there's going to be a happy ending, but I guess it was pretty clear that he was a butthole from the beginning. I thought he wanted to her to do something scandelous in front of a crowd, but this is even worse. Sigh.
4/18/2006 c1 emerald
man- *sigh* stupid stupid girl...even desperation has a limit...can some humans be that cruel...okay i don't want to know the answer...but can some humans be THAT desperate? Againi hope i never find out and also hope I don't fall for someone that way...again you can't love someone before you love yourself...why don't people understand that? Well that was great...I am touched.
man- *sigh* stupid stupid girl...even desperation has a limit...can some humans be that cruel...okay i don't want to know the answer...but can some humans be THAT desperate? Againi hope i never find out and also hope I don't fall for someone that way...again you can't love someone before you love yourself...why don't people understand that? Well that was great...I am touched.
4/18/2006 c1 lalaLAMA
chop him, chop him up into beautiful little pices...then step on the remains...alot...omg, how sadwha
chop him, chop him up into beautiful little pices...then step on the remains...alot...omg, how sadwha
4/18/2006 c1 4Undecided.And.Confused
She should fucking grab the freaken razer and chop him to little peices, and then set him on fire to fry while his still alive!What a fudge face. So preatty yet so wrong.
She should fucking grab the freaken razer and chop him to little peices, and then set him on fire to fry while his still alive!What a fudge face. So preatty yet so wrong.
4/18/2006 c1 dancingintherain
your words are like poetry
your words are like poetry
4/18/2006 c1 bluz
as dark and odd that chapter was, i found it interesting. Not interesting of what she did to herself, but it pulled me in, and i couldn't stop reading.
as dark and odd that chapter was, i found it interesting. Not interesting of what she did to herself, but it pulled me in, and i couldn't stop reading.
4/18/2006 c1 55Taolei
Beautiful Kelli, like always. It's so sad and bittersweet, but perfect. You have a very original way of writing and making quite a morbid idea into a beautiful one. :P It's a gift, really. You're a great writer, keep it up. I love reading. :)
Beautiful Kelli, like always. It's so sad and bittersweet, but perfect. You have a very original way of writing and making quite a morbid idea into a beautiful one. :P It's a gift, really. You're a great writer, keep it up. I love reading. :)
4/18/2006 c1 5Kurai-Tenshi of Doom
That was...different. I think I get it, but I'll keep it to myself =DLiked it though ;) Good to see something new from you!
-Kurai-Tenshi~^^;
That was...different. I think I get it, but I'll keep it to myself =DLiked it though ;) Good to see something new from you!
-Kurai-Tenshi~^^;