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8/18/2006 c1 23Erimenthy
I agree with the reviewers who talk about how this shows there is still good in the world. I thought most of the good had been clouded over as well. Its nice to see/read about these sort of things.

My favorite lines are the last four, they were a great closing. Keep writing.
8/4/2006 c1 7Fresh C
I like this poem because of it reminds me that there are good people in the world even if it's hard to tell everyday. I also enjoyed the way that you seem to put us there in the situation. Almost as if it's happening as we read. It didn't have any remarkable flow or rhyme scheme, but the message alone carried it through.
6/6/2006 c1 NowNameless
i like the meaning of this peace. really good. Write on!

-nameless-
4/27/2006 c1 cat-and-mouse
Aww...nice portrait.
4/18/2006 c1 9Rhianika
Nice poem! It seemed really simple, just describing people on a bus, but then I realized its not that simple. I know whats its like being on a bus, everyones quiet, no one smiles at each other, that kind of thing. But when someone does smile, or start a conversation, its awesome. So great poem. Maybe there is hope eh? :)

Keep writing

~Rhia

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