for Dark Brown Eyes8/10/2009 c15 
2MelodicNightmare
I think your story is pretty good, but it's annoying how Chole seems to think only Jonah is at fault with the whole sleeping with him thing, and I'm confused at when she was depressed and saying how no one loved her, since she had Jace didn'r she?
2MelodicNightmareI think your story is pretty good, but it's annoying how Chole seems to think only Jonah is at fault with the whole sleeping with him thing, and I'm confused at when she was depressed and saying how no one loved her, since she had Jace didn'r she?
12/31/2007 c2 5christinaxxyo
The beginning was a bit wordy for me, but it did say a lot. Interesting first chapter and nice development for the characters.
5christinaxxyoThe beginning was a bit wordy for me, but it did say a lot. Interesting first chapter and nice development for the characters.
10/13/2007 c9 mememe
hey wazzup.
i'm up to chapter 9 dudeman...
you know who i am hahaha
- fellow P-plate stealer... almost.
hey wazzup.
i'm up to chapter 9 dudeman...
you know who i am hahaha
- fellow P-plate stealer... almost.
4/9/2007 c8 24xoxluurve
cute. though there was more talking than actions in this. xD Chloe is really nosey, though. -sigh- xP onto the next chapter. . .
24xoxluurvecute. though there was more talking than actions in this. xD Chloe is really nosey, though. -sigh- xP onto the next chapter. . .
1/7/2007 c23 3ice-cold-pepsi
I wood hv loved the nedin 2b longer coz wen it finished i was just lyk..WOW! It was a lil abrupt 2 me but either way, i loved it.
3ice-cold-pepsiI wood hv loved the nedin 2b longer coz wen it finished i was just lyk..WOW! It was a lil abrupt 2 me but either way, i loved it.
12/3/2006 c16 outsomniac
ok. so i was wrong about jason... . sorry jason ^_^ you got cheated on multiple times... and wow, all of the girls in chloe's life seem to backstab her while all of the guys in her life fall for her...hahah it must be animal magnetism or something like that..
ok. so i was wrong about jason... . sorry jason ^_^ you got cheated on multiple times... and wow, all of the girls in chloe's life seem to backstab her while all of the guys in her life fall for her...hahah it must be animal magnetism or something like that..
12/3/2006 c8 outsomniac
ugh. i dont like jace. he gives me evil vibes. maybe he wont, but i think he's a player and will therefore cheat on her or play her or something...i think that chloe is pretty, but not gorgeous...if he could go out with someone like chastity, i doubt he would go out with chloe, even though he does seem pretty nice...sometimes.
ugh. i dont like jace. he gives me evil vibes. maybe he wont, but i think he's a player and will therefore cheat on her or play her or something...i think that chloe is pretty, but not gorgeous...if he could go out with someone like chastity, i doubt he would go out with chloe, even though he does seem pretty nice...sometimes.
11/17/2006 c1 catlover
i love ur story. ur style of writing is amazing coz u make a person feel as if their rite there. thats quite a talent. reading this story was a pleasure.
i love ur story. ur style of writing is amazing coz u make a person feel as if their rite there. thats quite a talent. reading this story was a pleasure.
11/16/2006 c23 17Lady of romance world88
hey. I glad Jonah and Chloe were end up together in end. I glad it turn out was happily ever after for them. Your story was so good :)
17Lady of romance world88hey. I glad Jonah and Chloe were end up together in end. I glad it turn out was happily ever after for them. Your story was so good :)
9/15/2006 c23 blitzstar12hotmail.com
Firstly i would like to say: well done.But throughout the whole story i felt so argh with chloe. She's so self pitying and there's so much drama in one story. I think the thing i hate the most is how Jonah suddenly started liking her... and then how in this chapter he ignores her, but suddenly when she says i love you, he loves her too...what about his girlfriend? There's so much cheating in this story. It's not nice to read about.
Firstly i would like to say: well done.But throughout the whole story i felt so argh with chloe. She's so self pitying and there's so much drama in one story. I think the thing i hate the most is how Jonah suddenly started liking her... and then how in this chapter he ignores her, but suddenly when she says i love you, he loves her too...what about his girlfriend? There's so much cheating in this story. It's not nice to read about.
9/11/2006 c23 Strangely Natural
Surprisingly amazing is all I can say. This would make one heck of a movie in my opinion. This was genuinely a good, realistic yet feel good story. The self-doubt did get a bit overbearing at times but doesn't it always? especially when one's a teenager. I commend you on your creation, truly great!
Surprisingly amazing is all I can say. This would make one heck of a movie in my opinion. This was genuinely a good, realistic yet feel good story. The self-doubt did get a bit overbearing at times but doesn't it always? especially when one's a teenager. I commend you on your creation, truly great!
9/10/2006 c23 3TheGreatSorceressRheaa
WHAAT! THIS CAN'T BE THE LAST CHAPTER! YOU CAN'T JUST LEAVE IT THERE! WHY DO YOU TORMENT ME! I NEVER DID ANYTHING TO YOU!
That was so great! I loved it! As you can see above ^ If you added an epologue, I would love you forevers. *puppy-dog eyes* pwease.
3TheGreatSorceressRheaaWHAAT! THIS CAN'T BE THE LAST CHAPTER! YOU CAN'T JUST LEAVE IT THERE! WHY DO YOU TORMENT ME! I NEVER DID ANYTHING TO YOU!
That was so great! I loved it! As you can see above ^ If you added an epologue, I would love you forevers. *puppy-dog eyes* pwease.