Just In
Community
Forum
V
More
for Stabbing My Open Wound

5/23/2006 c1 2NeptuneShelly
explanation please
4/26/2006 c1 Man of the People
Holy lack of exposition, Batman! That's quite a scenelet you have there, although it doesn't really feel like a story. The descriptions aren't that bad, although they are a bit purple-y in some places. The real problem is that we don't really know who this character is so we really have no reason to empathize with her or her situation. It feels like when you turn on a TV show right in the middle and have no clue what's going on and why anything is happening.
4/19/2006 c1 108Kirona of the skies
o_O

Twitter . Help . Sign Up . Cookies . Privacy . Terms of Service