for Emotionless9/27/2006 c1 
2punkturnedwriter
WOW. That was pretty brilliant, and I can relate completely. Especially the part about wanting people's attention so as to make them see what they want to see... a flawless person. And the part about Prince Charming. Great job!
2punkturnedwriterWOW. That was pretty brilliant, and I can relate completely. Especially the part about wanting people's attention so as to make them see what they want to see... a flawless person. And the part about Prince Charming. Great job!
7/17/2006 c1 Eire Rain
That was really awesome. I wish I could paint. hehe. I'll stick to writing though. Keep up the good work and thanks for reviewing me!
That was really awesome. I wish I could paint. hehe. I'll stick to writing though. Keep up the good work and thanks for reviewing me!
6/4/2006 c1 9sputnik sweetheart
NENG!
AH, I'm sorry I never reviewed, but I really like this story, and I hope it'll be a chapter story? NENG! WHAT ARE YOU DOING? UPDATE!
If you update, then i'll burn you that mix CD. Promise.
9sputnik sweetheartNENG!
AH, I'm sorry I never reviewed, but I really like this story, and I hope it'll be a chapter story? NENG! WHAT ARE YOU DOING? UPDATE!
If you update, then i'll burn you that mix CD. Promise.
4/29/2006 c1 9Lyssa O
Goodness, you failed to tell me that you had an account on here, but you have to remember that I have a coy way of finding things out. I like exploring the world of the vast internet and finding new things! Haha. I guess you have a right to hide it from me? Unless you didn't want me finding out that you're on here, and didn't want me reading this...but hey, I'm your first reviewer.
In any case, I'm finding a parallel here with your own life, no? It just...to me, it sounds like you. I mean, even though you really haven't told me any of this personally, I kind of get that vibe that this piece is exuding your personal feelings in the form of a fictional story.
Okay, okay, sorry if I'm being too analytical. But I like it! Sounds like a headstrong girl who's going to end up meeting her match. Mmhmm. Cause you know, cliché high school romances don't happen in real life. That's why they're so unbelievably cliché. And that's why I don't fall in love at such a young age. Because I don't believe that I can possibly find something akin to that feeling anytime soon. You know, I'm such a romantic cynist at times, it's silly.
Mmkay, I'm babbling on about I don't know what. I'm just sick and sick and sick and congested and I feel like ugh. But I'm liking it, I'm liking it. And you better keep up with it, unlike me. Because I would procrastinate until the end of time if I could. Seriously. Have you even read my stories? I know you read My Paper Heart (not my favorite), but I want you to read um...my other ones, if you wouldn't mind. Eh, they're crap, never mind.
OKAY. I'm really going now.
LoveLoveLove,Lys.
9Lyssa OGoodness, you failed to tell me that you had an account on here, but you have to remember that I have a coy way of finding things out. I like exploring the world of the vast internet and finding new things! Haha. I guess you have a right to hide it from me? Unless you didn't want me finding out that you're on here, and didn't want me reading this...but hey, I'm your first reviewer.
In any case, I'm finding a parallel here with your own life, no? It just...to me, it sounds like you. I mean, even though you really haven't told me any of this personally, I kind of get that vibe that this piece is exuding your personal feelings in the form of a fictional story.
Okay, okay, sorry if I'm being too analytical. But I like it! Sounds like a headstrong girl who's going to end up meeting her match. Mmhmm. Cause you know, cliché high school romances don't happen in real life. That's why they're so unbelievably cliché. And that's why I don't fall in love at such a young age. Because I don't believe that I can possibly find something akin to that feeling anytime soon. You know, I'm such a romantic cynist at times, it's silly.
Mmkay, I'm babbling on about I don't know what. I'm just sick and sick and sick and congested and I feel like ugh. But I'm liking it, I'm liking it. And you better keep up with it, unlike me. Because I would procrastinate until the end of time if I could. Seriously. Have you even read my stories? I know you read My Paper Heart (not my favorite), but I want you to read um...my other ones, if you wouldn't mind. Eh, they're crap, never mind.
OKAY. I'm really going now.
LoveLoveLove,Lys.