for The Formidable7/13/2006 c1 
18Plinky
Nice... It feels a bit like a song to me.
Very prettily written. I like it.
Keep writing!
18PlinkyNice... It feels a bit like a song to me.
Very prettily written. I like it.
Keep writing!
5/25/2006 c1 16MadamWriterGal
I personally like it. It flowed very well. I like the words and images that were used. Nicely done. A Satori is a ping of enlightnement that one gets now and again, while on the road to Nirvanna. Think of it like a flash on enlightenment. You almost have it...it's right on the tip of your tongue...but it slips away before you can get a better insight. This poem for example could be clasified as your own personal satori. I like your work! Keep up the good job. ^^ I can't wait to read more.
16MadamWriterGalI personally like it. It flowed very well. I like the words and images that were used. Nicely done. A Satori is a ping of enlightnement that one gets now and again, while on the road to Nirvanna. Think of it like a flash on enlightenment. You almost have it...it's right on the tip of your tongue...but it slips away before you can get a better insight. This poem for example could be clasified as your own personal satori. I like your work! Keep up the good job. ^^ I can't wait to read more.
4/25/2006 c1 free-to-dream15
Absolutely loved the rhyming in this poem! It made it flow a lot better! Keep up the awesome work!
Absolutely loved the rhyming in this poem! It made it flow a lot better! Keep up the awesome work!
4/21/2006 c1 B34utifulDr34mer
ree u cornball i luv u. u prolly know wut 3 words im thinking bout. he he
ree u cornball i luv u. u prolly know wut 3 words im thinking bout. he he
4/20/2006 c1 197the Stranger in the moonlight
I liked this it was really good. The fear of leaving or returning or any existenance at all actually sadly does exist.
Great job at captruing this emotion. I say the words were either "I love you" or something along the lines of "I'm leaving you/ I don't deserve you".
the Stranger in the moonlight
197the Stranger in the moonlightI liked this it was really good. The fear of leaving or returning or any existenance at all actually sadly does exist.
Great job at captruing this emotion. I say the words were either "I love you" or something along the lines of "I'm leaving you/ I don't deserve you".
the Stranger in the moonlight
4/20/2006 c1 13miss-hyperactive
wow! this is like a story! except better! i really like your writing! its a way of expressing myself except i only have to read it and you do all the writing... does that make sense? i knowi know i'm weird...but i love this its soo awesome!
13miss-hyperactivewow! this is like a story! except better! i really like your writing! its a way of expressing myself except i only have to read it and you do all the writing... does that make sense? i knowi know i'm weird...but i love this its soo awesome!