11/30/2015 c12 Sammie-Wammie
Your style of writing is so real and so over the top at the same time, that i'm absolutely in love with it. The way you make her crush on Robin Roe is so realistic it makes me think about how my High school crushes started! What sucks is I started reading 'To Fight or Fall' then I moved to this story because that one wasn't finished and I wasn't ready to leave your writing style just yet, thinking it was finished but was sorely mistaken (then after throwing a mini temper tantrum that puts my 21 years in question lol) I was committed even through I knew, I KNEW this story wouldn't be finished, the way you executed all of it I had to finish. I will tell you I'm definitely on Team Seth. (You know if there is ever a chance, I don't with the way you write!) But anyways I'm going to sulk at the incompleteness of this story and trying to appease myself with finding a new story. It was wonderful reading this, Thank you for sharing you creativity!

6/27/2015 c9 Guest
noooo! i want seth!

12/7/2014 c12 TheBeauty of Lie
I would sign in, and review like a proper reader should and greet you with all the compliments in the world for this story because I thought i'd hate Liz when we were first introduced to her. I thought Jess was a little ditzy and as a whole, Mimi was just too much of a dreamer. But the way you wove this story and the characters and their hillarious situations... I haven't laughed so hard in years. I worry for Jess and Kevin who are tiptoeing around their love, and my heart aches for Mimi because she is so delightfully herself and airy and sweet.. and I believe she's the kind of girl made of so much otherness that the real world may eventually beat it all out of her and she might one day become this shy tiny little thing like she thinks she is and presents herself to the world as. She reminds me of myself and I think many other girls, because who hasn't daydreamed about love and had these monologues and gone through life wondering wishing and waiting? It's nice to see a story with teenager issues not too aware of the cruel, harsh world. IT really takes me back and makes me wish i'd enjoyed high school a bit more. In short, I loved this story. Please please finish this masterpiece.

6/30/2013 c11 43moonqueens
OH MY GOD IS SETH ACTUALLY MYSTERY BOY
YES I WOULD DEFINITELY APPROVE OF THAT
(even though I adore Robin Roe 'cause he's a sweetie and his name is pretty cool like seriously good job with that one)

5/10/2013 c12 8Cute Writer
PLEASSSSSSSSSSSSE COME BACK, I NEEEEEEEEEDX TO KNOW WHAT HAPPENSSSSSSSSS!

12/25/2012 c8 Abigail Night
Hmmm...

10/6/2012 c12 1blackandbluewolf727
GREAT CHAPTER! So far... I've loved it, it's cute... but confusing... who is the main guy: Seth or Robin? Anyway UPDATE SOON! :D