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9/28/2006 c1 105eraced
wow! that was so beautiful. i haven't read your stuff in so long i've been gone for way to long. you'll get over your writers block. keep writing i know you can do it.

i begin again.~erAced~
6/30/2006 c1 52meaninglessTears
wow... I LOVE IT! u did so good! u're so good at expressing how you feel through words. i really like your poem and i hope u write more!
5/14/2006 c1 112akacz
...Wow. I think silentscreamer07 has quite aptly expressed my enthusiasm for this work. your pieces have become even more... perfect, for lack of a better word, since I've been around FP. Exemplary work on this one. Please keep writing
5/2/2006 c1 63silentscreamer07
O...MY...BOB!

I love this! I'm adding it to my favorite stories list! I LOVED THIS!

I just wanna scream and shout..and show everyone this poem, because I loved it so much...usually i pick out a favorite line...but...honestly...I loved every last word in this poem.

It really seemed like you took the thoughts from my head and wrote them down on paper for me, only you defintly wrote them with more beauty and grace and just...ka zaam! I loved this!

"Look deep in yourself and you'll surely see/The wonder and beauty that wants to be free."

So true..I could not agree with you anymore..that is very true, all of your poem though, I agreed with, and I think it is true.

This rhymed and flowed, and didn't sound forced at all...just very relaxing, and just calming..AH! i loved this! lol...okay..enough of my blabbering on, but I honestly just can't tell you how much I love this poem. *keep writing* you're extremely talented! and AH! i loved this! I'll be checking out for more of your writings! so keep posting :D

~britney~

*adds poem to favorites*
4/27/2006 c1 4roachpiece
this caught me off gaurd when i wasn't thinking about my love, but now i am.thank you~hailstar~your twin in the hailstorm
4/24/2006 c1 23Contender
I liked the sentiment in this one. The rhyming was approximate, which is fine for the style it was, but in a few parts, it seemed to lose any rhythm it had and got jumpy, mainly where the lines were uneven at the end of the 3rd stanza. It can be tweaked, but it's good material to start with for sure. *thumbs up*

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