for Saturday4/26/2006 c1 Joelle Duran
There such a feel of wistful nostalgia to this, as well as serene tranquility. Nice job with the simple rhyme, too. Good work!
There such a feel of wistful nostalgia to this, as well as serene tranquility. Nice job with the simple rhyme, too. Good work!
4/26/2006 c1 
13Shadowhound
interesting. i like the descriptions you give. it makes everything very life like and intriguing.
Shadowhound
13Shadowhoundinteresting. i like the descriptions you give. it makes everything very life like and intriguing.
Shadowhound
4/24/2006 c1 1rrmehta364
"murmurs soft above my head" : I think it should be softly, but I like the sound of soft. I generally prefer bad grammar to good, but I'm weird like that.
Wait, as in Charlie White the photographer?
Well, excellent poem. I don't have much to say except I loved it.
-peace out.
1rrmehta364"murmurs soft above my head" : I think it should be softly, but I like the sound of soft. I generally prefer bad grammar to good, but I'm weird like that.
Wait, as in Charlie White the photographer?
Well, excellent poem. I don't have much to say except I loved it.
-peace out.