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8/19/2006 c1 6McQuinn
I really appreciate the brevity of this - the amount of emotion you relate to us is just right, though I think I would've like to have seen a bit more descriptions. I think this is just so cute, and so meaningful, especially the last few lines.

Good job. Keep it up!

-McQuinn
4/25/2006 c1 13kirsten was
that was lovely
4/24/2006 c1 18Ashayla Noel
Aw! This is so sweet! My fiance and I have been together for 2 1/2 years, and whenever we kiss it's still like that! All exciting and your heart flutters...I love it. Your story too. LOL.
4/24/2006 c1 39Moppish
He so shwet. I like it. Brave of you to kiss infront of his mom, especially for the first time. I think every writer tries to capture their first kiss at least once. Whether they put it on public display or not is another matter. You captured the experienced well. I especially liked that this is your first kiss with a certain boy, not your first kiss period. My favorite part of this was. "We both pull back and I look into your eyes again, everything feels different, it feels new." Yeah that's how it is. Awesome job.

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