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4/10/2007 c1 kris bartolome
i love your variety in writing style. the train of thought was superb. again with andrei's name, who is he, really? someone special, i presume. he keeps showing up in your work.. great job.
5/3/2006 c1 6Andre' Betita
I've read your works and I love the varietiy of writing styles. And the style in this story is one of the best. What is it with the name "Andrei" and you! Haha...maybe I met you in a past life or something!

By the way, you're a UP-an? Guess what! I'm an incoming freshman in UP, too!
4/25/2006 c1 6Imaginary Parachute
Great work, gillian-raine, I really liked this. Her cynicism is really well written, and I actually laughed at the "intense stare" part. So kudos to you, and yes, in my opinion, you passed!
4/25/2006 c1 13kirsten was
yeah, you did well on showing and not telling the mood... the stream of consciousness did that for ya. i liked the twist at the end. and sunken garden is a beautiful name.

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