for Elevators7/17/2019 c5 Mukta Gadgil
Wow this story is so adorably cute. The way the mood was set and their conversations didn't feel forced but went with the flow. I noticed the word 'veritable' often popped out at places which is my new favorite word now.
The girl is adorkably cute and the guy is deliciously romantic. The way you described them had me. Hooked
Wow this story is so adorably cute. The way the mood was set and their conversations didn't feel forced but went with the flow. I noticed the word 'veritable' often popped out at places which is my new favorite word now.
The girl is adorkably cute and the guy is deliciously romantic. The way you described them had me. Hooked
11/12/2014 c5 BlackHare9
aahhhhh omg omg omg*jumping up and down like a little girl* I think i had my goofiest smile on for most of the story. they are soooooooooo adorable.
aahhhhh omg omg omg*jumping up and down like a little girl* I think i had my goofiest smile on for most of the story. they are soooooooooo adorable.
7/30/2014 c5 SRee
You are extremely good. You should seriously think about getting yourself published.
You are extremely good. You should seriously think about getting yourself published.
7/4/2014 c5 ajashire1
Awwwwwwww dude this is absolutely wonderful!
I'm filled with so many fuzzys right now. This story has made my day! X3
Awwwwwwww dude this is absolutely wonderful!
I'm filled with so many fuzzys right now. This story has made my day! X3
8/4/2013 c5 
4Let'sGetDownToBusiness
I love the whole concept of your story, how it wasn't too "cheesy" (though I have no idea how their relationship would work out afterwards) but when she told Nathan that the two poems were about him, wouldn't you be pretty freaked out if someone had a crush on you for so long? But other than that, it was cute :]
4Let'sGetDownToBusinessI love the whole concept of your story, how it wasn't too "cheesy" (though I have no idea how their relationship would work out afterwards) but when she told Nathan that the two poems were about him, wouldn't you be pretty freaked out if someone had a crush on you for so long? But other than that, it was cute :]
8/3/2013 c5 arien
So, what about Janelle?
So, what about Janelle?
6/1/2013 c5 3TheClosetWriter16
Wow, I loved this so much! :D It is amazing! I can't believe you were 14/15 when you wrote it haha. Seriously though, I enjoyed every second of this story! ;) Feel free to write a sequel :P
3TheClosetWriter16Wow, I loved this so much! :D It is amazing! I can't believe you were 14/15 when you wrote it haha. Seriously though, I enjoyed every second of this story! ;) Feel free to write a sequel :P
4/14/2013 c5 2Clawstrike590
Just found you now. I wish I found you earlier though. The story is great and I completely vote for a sequel! Haha. You are an amazing writer.
Your new reader,
Clawstrike590
2Clawstrike590Just found you now. I wish I found you earlier though. The story is great and I completely vote for a sequel! Haha. You are an amazing writer.
Your new reader,
Clawstrike590