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5/4/2006 c1 46a headless butterfly
you bring across the seventies so brillantly, your images are so vivid. the only thing that irks me is the one liner Retroism i think it spoils the flow of the poem! but very good job overall (:
4/27/2006 c1 zakei
im blah. from walkingbroken's blog. and i like your poem! you write SO MUCH BETTER THAN ME. and i LIKE your language! its so cute and lively and.. retro. haha. yeah. THAT ROCKS! xD
4/25/2006 c1 73Jezsh
prettily written. Has a lovely summery feel to it. Very evocative.

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