6/7/2006 c1 48shining defiance
I like the idea here, and I can see where you're coming from. I especially like the title. Irregular verbs can be such a pain, but you made this work very well. Nice job :)
I like the idea here, and I can see where you're coming from. I especially like the title. Irregular verbs can be such a pain, but you made this work very well. Nice job :)
6/4/2006 c1 Katie
Back, to plague you with another long, rambling, probably nonsensical review.
Very sweet, and cleverly written. The ending's sad... am I sensing jealousy, possibly much resentment towards this 'He'? Or am I overanalysing this? How you managed to be inspired by a French lesson is beyond me, but well done anyway.Oh - and I love 'You (pl.) scorn'. Aww.*sniffle*
That's about all I have to say about this little but well thought-out poem right now, but expect an email sometime soon with a lot of rambling about how sweet it is. Seriously.Ciao! ~Katie
Anonymously reviewing annoys me. Maybe I should get an account. Hmm...
Back, to plague you with another long, rambling, probably nonsensical review.
Very sweet, and cleverly written. The ending's sad... am I sensing jealousy, possibly much resentment towards this 'He'? Or am I overanalysing this? How you managed to be inspired by a French lesson is beyond me, but well done anyway.Oh - and I love 'You (pl.) scorn'. Aww.*sniffle*
That's about all I have to say about this little but well thought-out poem right now, but expect an email sometime soon with a lot of rambling about how sweet it is. Seriously.Ciao! ~Katie
Anonymously reviewing annoys me. Maybe I should get an account. Hmm...
6/2/2006 c1 Vinay
hey, just caught this after looking at ur msn space. I'm not gonna pretend to know anything about poetry or writing but i like this - very slick, new (to me at least), great idea. And not too depressing like your other stuff. I don't know why it's depressing, probably just cos it makes me think. I don't enjoy that.Oh well, all in all, I'm impressed. You have another side to you i didnt know bout. Koolio.Rock on dude
hey, just caught this after looking at ur msn space. I'm not gonna pretend to know anything about poetry or writing but i like this - very slick, new (to me at least), great idea. And not too depressing like your other stuff. I don't know why it's depressing, probably just cos it makes me think. I don't enjoy that.Oh well, all in all, I'm impressed. You have another side to you i didnt know bout. Koolio.Rock on dude
5/21/2006 c1 Poppy
hey, i was looking at your new poem, and then others and i saw i hadnt reviewed this one, i swear i had, bt maybe i jst talked on msn. anyway, it's really clever, and i think in fact "i love You, but" does work, even though it's not a verb like the rest of them. v gd poemx
hey, i was looking at your new poem, and then others and i saw i hadnt reviewed this one, i swear i had, bt maybe i jst talked on msn. anyway, it's really clever, and i think in fact "i love You, but" does work, even though it's not a verb like the rest of them. v gd poemx
4/30/2006 c1 Guest
i loved it. almost like a haiku...
i loved it. almost like a haiku...
4/29/2006 c1 A Rabid Zealot
Well Hideho there! I like this, it has a certain air. I ain't being sarcastic, I mean it!
Well Hideho there! I like this, it has a certain air. I ain't being sarcastic, I mean it!
4/27/2006 c1 19Olivine
aww that was a sweet poem! i liked the shortness of it- the lines and length, both. i dont know why but it made it better than if you were to have extended it, or something.
keep on writing ~~M.W. Renaee-:|:-
aww that was a sweet poem! i liked the shortness of it- the lines and length, both. i dont know why but it made it better than if you were to have extended it, or something.
keep on writing ~~M.W. Renaee-:|:-
4/27/2006 c1 106Windup Hopping Lederhosen
Like Johnny, I take German so I really know where you're coming from with the conjugation part. It's heartfelt and I really like the "You (pl)" part. v.v. good!
Like Johnny, I take German so I really know where you're coming from with the conjugation part. It's heartfelt and I really like the "You (pl)" part. v.v. good!
4/26/2006 c1 Crossing the Rubicon
Hey, this is an awesome idea. I take German, so I now have an appreciation for conjugating. Yeah, I probably shouldn't mention the second line since others have. This is really cool though. :)
Hey, this is an awesome idea. I take German, so I now have an appreciation for conjugating. Yeah, I probably shouldn't mention the second line since others have. This is really cool though. :)
4/26/2006 c1 2Chelseamuffin
Hm... Different? Yes, very different. The beginning was... kind of weird. I understand why you did it come ca, but it still felt kinda weird... meh. Still good. Write on!
Hm... Different? Yes, very different. The beginning was... kind of weird. I understand why you did it come ca, but it still felt kinda weird... meh. Still good. Write on!
4/26/2006 c1 cynick
hm.
"I love
You, but"
Seems wrong there. I can see why you did it, but it just doesn't quite work.
hm.
"I love
You, but"
Seems wrong there. I can see why you did it, but it just doesn't quite work.