for Needle Point8/20/2006 c1 thousandwordsworthy
How about nurses who say " Just a little poke". Well written. I wasnt scared of needles until I read this!
How about nurses who say " Just a little poke". Well written. I wasnt scared of needles until I read this!
7/8/2006 c1 
3Forsakn
Haha, very cute! The needle seems like a big monstie now, thanks to your imagery. One point to note, tho. In the second line, you use 'thee' in place of you, and that's the only time you use it. Either go archaic completely, or stay away from it. IMO, anyway. :)
3ForsaknHaha, very cute! The needle seems like a big monstie now, thanks to your imagery. One point to note, tho. In the second line, you use 'thee' in place of you, and that's the only time you use it. Either go archaic completely, or stay away from it. IMO, anyway. :)
4/27/2006 c1 49Em0tionally UnStAbLe
Very Well written! Check out my stuff when you getta chance! Laterz!
49Em0tionally UnStAbLeVery Well written! Check out my stuff when you getta chance! Laterz!