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5/6/2006 c1 10MB Rumpf
thanks for the review.
5/1/2006 c2 Puppylover2345
Great!
4/28/2006 c1 1fallingtears-x
Oh my first review! Thanks! :)I'll bear that in mind as this I only discovered this site the other day, so I'll take what you said onboard!:)
4/27/2006 c1 12Mac Vicchrilli
this sounds like a good start to a story! I think i like where it's going. I'd like to get to know the characters more, and it seems to have quite the interesting plot line :P Tip: Try to make the chapters a little longer. It holds readers attention longer, and keeps them wanting even more. Update soon and keep up the good work!

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