for Window5/14/2006 c1 
6Made in Britain
I really like this, lurve the rhymes and especially the ending. It made something stir within me, a memory I think.
6Made in BritainI really like this, lurve the rhymes and especially the ending. It made something stir within me, a memory I think.
5/14/2006 c1 12AmethystAsphyxiaion
oer i do like it! i like the end part and the ideas in the poem except i think you could've put a little more form or shape to the first part. and it's a little confusing... the way you've structured the sentence in the 'loving must be an art' part. i'm not too sure what it's saying.. and like i said before.. the window being clear and lovely is a little weird in contrast to the broken melody coming through it.. unless that was an intended contrast..:) another emotional poem eh?
12AmethystAsphyxiaionoer i do like it! i like the end part and the ideas in the poem except i think you could've put a little more form or shape to the first part. and it's a little confusing... the way you've structured the sentence in the 'loving must be an art' part. i'm not too sure what it's saying.. and like i said before.. the window being clear and lovely is a little weird in contrast to the broken melody coming through it.. unless that was an intended contrast..:) another emotional poem eh?