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7/13/2015 c1 Lunachas
Perfect Succinct
9/4/2008 c1 58Erlkoenigin
Ich beneide ja immer die englischsprachigen Haikudichter darum, dass es viel k├╝rzere Worte, gibt, trotzdem: ein echter Meilenstein
2/23/2007 c1 Charity F
You are quite the haiku writer, yes?

Excellent job with this one. I can be applied to so many different things, different situations. Gawsh, i love it.
12/12/2006 c1 jojoba-music-girl
Mostly I don't like haiku poetry, but this one really surprised me. I like this one very much! Keep up this good work, I'll check it out!
11/11/2006 c1 871no.peace.los.angeles
This poem is so interesting. I don't know what to say about it other than the fact that it's fascinating and I wonder what you were thinking when you wrote it, since it's not necessarily about Stonehenge. Wow. Keep writing! :)
10/27/2006 c1 102Terra Fire
I like this haiku, I see a lot of diffrent images. Very good.

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~VGT~
7/6/2006 c1 90poetic abortion
I love it.

The ending is in particularly starteling, so noticable and just plain great.

~* Noelle
6/16/2006 c1 2SinCorazon
I immediately thought of graveyard, souls, and old people.

I see it as, the once living will rise again. You know, that kind of thing, even if that's the thing you were totally not going for.
5/30/2006 c1 AimeeRaven
Hm...I really felt like reading this again...thought I ought to let you know...it really is beautiful, even though I think I've stated clearly enough my disapproval of english haiku XD :-P...I love this one, I must admit...brilliant work...you've just captured this one, ethereal, mystical emotion I can't define...fantastic! Love, Mia
5/21/2006 c1 612simpleplan13
interesting.. i like it.. thanks for your review
5/15/2006 c1 87youzi
sounds like something out of ancient folklores...some kind of prophecy perhaps? this made me think :D
5/3/2006 c1 593Morwain
hmm...interesting
5/2/2006 c1 92burning in effigy
...reminds me of a campfire... like with the stones in a circle and flames "dance" inside...

Simple poem, but it's up for interpretation... nice
5/1/2006 c1 acccountkiller
I like this, I really do, but I'm not very much into Haiku...I'm sorry, you probably don't want my opinion, but I think it's great you're learning japanese because haiku poetry can never be what it is in english or any language but Chinese and Japanese basically...I've been learning Chinese for four years now, and the thing is that every haiku verse in Chinese like in Japanese can be interpreted in a lot of ways...in English, it's quite a bit harder; in Japanese a haiku can come across as a poem a lot longer than simply three or four verses, in English that's hard to achieve...this isn't a flame or criticism, it's just my opinion, I'm sorry if I've offended...kudos to you for learning Japanese ;). And Stonehenge is magnificent..."the will dance again" really makes this the best English Haiku I've ever read :). Love, Mia
4/30/2006 c1 71abstractelysium
Having been to stonehenge, I totally get this. I like it a lot. Nice wording, the ending is particulary effective.

Wunderbar, meine freundin!

abby
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