for I confess i love my brother5/8/2006 c1 
9Morbid Maxwell
W00t! Newness! I really like this already but does it mean you're done working on the others? *Teary eyed* OMGoddess Kali if you are that sucks even if there is twincest in this! *Stops, thinks, drools* Anywho...w00t! I like this, the brothers are hot, and the plot seems interesting...write more, ne?
Morbid Maxwell~"I see London , I see France, I see two guys getting into each others pants!"
9Morbid MaxwellW00t! Newness! I really like this already but does it mean you're done working on the others? *Teary eyed* OMGoddess Kali if you are that sucks even if there is twincest in this! *Stops, thinks, drools* Anywho...w00t! I like this, the brothers are hot, and the plot seems interesting...write more, ne?
Morbid Maxwell~"I see London , I see France, I see two guys getting into each others pants!"
5/2/2006 c1 24Limited Edition
Did I stumble into a lyrics site all of a sudden...? You probably love those lyrics a lot, but no one is bored enough to bother reading through them, just putting the most important lines on is enough dear. I'll just skim through to the story...
When writing in third person point of view, it is important not to give a subjective view. Thou shant give thy own opinion, since you're not in the story XD Although, when you give those descriptions, the language is very nice and it's beautifully worded, just not...well fitting XD Practice makes perfect though!
Oh shit. You know what? I like you, I like the story, I like the writing style, why don't I beta for you? Send your stuff to my email and I'll send em back as soon as possible *wink*
24Limited EditionDid I stumble into a lyrics site all of a sudden...? You probably love those lyrics a lot, but no one is bored enough to bother reading through them, just putting the most important lines on is enough dear. I'll just skim through to the story...
When writing in third person point of view, it is important not to give a subjective view. Thou shant give thy own opinion, since you're not in the story XD Although, when you give those descriptions, the language is very nice and it's beautifully worded, just not...well fitting XD Practice makes perfect though!
Oh shit. You know what? I like you, I like the story, I like the writing style, why don't I beta for you? Send your stuff to my email and I'll send em back as soon as possible *wink*
4/30/2006 c1 Iamausername
I think I'm quite in love with Acon and Shade (and after only one chapter too!) I really hope you continue soon, can't wait to see what happens!
I think I'm quite in love with Acon and Shade (and after only one chapter too!) I really hope you continue soon, can't wait to see what happens!
4/30/2006 c1 1unloved-love
Wow! I really love how this story is going. Aconite and Nightshade, those are interesting names. I love this story and i can't wait til the next chapter!
1unloved-loveWow! I really love how this story is going. Aconite and Nightshade, those are interesting names. I love this story and i can't wait til the next chapter!