for Nothing but a label7/17/2006 c1 
8writerwithoutacause
ok so i reviewed the second ch and i felt rlly bad cause it sounded negative so i just wanted to say i really love the first ch its very poignant and i know alot of kids like that.
8writerwithoutacauseok so i reviewed the second ch and i felt rlly bad cause it sounded negative so i just wanted to say i really love the first ch its very poignant and i know alot of kids like that.
7/17/2006 c2 writerwithoutacause
hmm interesting, but your really need to talk about why all this is happening ot her and how the teachers allowed to hit her. because even though its very well written and it really is, it seems slightly far fetched. anywayss update soon!
hmm interesting, but your really need to talk about why all this is happening ot her and how the teachers allowed to hit her. because even though its very well written and it really is, it seems slightly far fetched. anywayss update soon!
7/15/2006 c2 12elisefey
As the beginning to a story this is so sad! But I think the counseling program is an interesting twist and could really take the story somewhere both poignant and entertaining. You should continue!
12elisefeyAs the beginning to a story this is so sad! But I think the counseling program is an interesting twist and could really take the story somewhere both poignant and entertaining. You should continue!
5/2/2006 c2 4NoLongerHereIMSORRY
very nice story so far. i love it. i can relate just a little bit. i'm the girl that gets ignored. well i really like your story and update soon.
4NoLongerHereIMSORRYvery nice story so far. i love it. i can relate just a little bit. i'm the girl that gets ignored. well i really like your story and update soon.
4/30/2006 c1 17mystery-art
I wish life got better, its as if there has to be a consious thought to change the out come, but yet its as if following this path is all they know so they wont... Well written...
17mystery-artI wish life got better, its as if there has to be a consious thought to change the out come, but yet its as if following this path is all they know so they wont... Well written...