for Creator6/23/2006 c1 
61the.pink.life
Creepy. This is a very fantasy-like piece. The tone of the whole thing works well. Keep writing! :)
61the.pink.lifeCreepy. This is a very fantasy-like piece. The tone of the whole thing works well. Keep writing! :)
5/1/2006 c1 egwshrgfdf
No reviews? Boulderdash! _
Y'know, it's almost kinda rare to see a tradgedy that acts as a tradgedy from the very beginning. I didn't even really look at the category that this was in, and right from the get-go, I had this drop in my throat and stomach.
You've got a flair for the sorrowful, Meg, as always. I'm not really sure what part I would say is my favourite, so I guess the whole thing in summation was what made it good. Hey, that's what makes a good poem!
Lovely work as always, and I hope to see more from you soon. Your work's really blossoming! *Adds to favourites box*
No reviews? Boulderdash! _
Y'know, it's almost kinda rare to see a tradgedy that acts as a tradgedy from the very beginning. I didn't even really look at the category that this was in, and right from the get-go, I had this drop in my throat and stomach.
You've got a flair for the sorrowful, Meg, as always. I'm not really sure what part I would say is my favourite, so I guess the whole thing in summation was what made it good. Hey, that's what makes a good poem!
Lovely work as always, and I hope to see more from you soon. Your work's really blossoming! *Adds to favourites box*