for Grilled Cheese Sandwiches9/5/2006 c6 HungarianPotatoFarmer
It's distracting because it's an "unnatural" hair color. Whatever. There's kids walking around with mohawks for crying out loud...seems more distracting than blue hair to me. And, yes, that would be the smurfs. Anyways...to the story. It's really good. I liked it a lot. In fact, I liked it so much that I would like you to update soon...so...yeah. Update soon, please!
Sincerely, H.P. Farmer
It's distracting because it's an "unnatural" hair color. Whatever. There's kids walking around with mohawks for crying out loud...seems more distracting than blue hair to me. And, yes, that would be the smurfs. Anyways...to the story. It's really good. I liked it a lot. In fact, I liked it so much that I would like you to update soon...so...yeah. Update soon, please!
Sincerely, H.P. Farmer
9/5/2006 c6 
2S.M.G. Lynn
^^ Your welcome! Lol, Finally! Omg, i think i was waiting for like... EVER! Lol. Tells ya how much i like this fic, eh? lol. Can't wait for s'more! ^^ latas!
Akeryou
2S.M.G. Lynn^^ Your welcome! Lol, Finally! Omg, i think i was waiting for like... EVER! Lol. Tells ya how much i like this fic, eh? lol. Can't wait for s'more! ^^ latas!
Akeryou
9/5/2006 c6 22Rebellion Author
cool. Jody is just a little hyper, but both Cassandra and Jody seam to be a little annoying, but that's just me. Good chapter. Please update soon (or Kaeli will go all killer-book-worm on you).
Rebellion Author.
22Rebellion Authorcool. Jody is just a little hyper, but both Cassandra and Jody seam to be a little annoying, but that's just me. Good chapter. Please update soon (or Kaeli will go all killer-book-worm on you).
Rebellion Author.
8/3/2006 c5 HungarianPotatoFarmer
I had blue spiked hair! It was smurf blue! But I had to dye it black for school...not allowed to have "distracting" hairdos. But my yearbook picture has blue hair...hehehe. It was cool. But I still spike it, even with it black. Sorry, off topic and almost completely random. I really like it! It's good. Can you please update soon? I can't wait to read more.
Sincerely, H.P. Farmer
I had blue spiked hair! It was smurf blue! But I had to dye it black for school...not allowed to have "distracting" hairdos. But my yearbook picture has blue hair...hehehe. It was cool. But I still spike it, even with it black. Sorry, off topic and almost completely random. I really like it! It's good. Can you please update soon? I can't wait to read more.
Sincerely, H.P. Farmer
8/3/2006 c5 2S.M.G. Lynn
Nice fic. ;-) I really like it. its amusing. Logan sounds pretty cool. Dennis... hm... my first impression was he'd be a punk. lawl. and um Maria i thought she'd be a punk or a goth.. something like that. ;-) way different from most stories I've read. WTG! XD Update soon!
2S.M.G. LynnNice fic. ;-) I really like it. its amusing. Logan sounds pretty cool. Dennis... hm... my first impression was he'd be a punk. lawl. and um Maria i thought she'd be a punk or a goth.. something like that. ;-) way different from most stories I've read. WTG! XD Update soon!
6/9/2006 c4 22Rebellion Author
Well as one of your certain pestering classmates I say well done I LOVED this chapter. Katy is really cute. Hey which one of us is the pyromaniac? Just wondering. Now I know you just updated but I would be neglecting duties not to do the following UPDATE SOON! please. Ok gotta go.
Rebellion Author.
22Rebellion AuthorWell as one of your certain pestering classmates I say well done I LOVED this chapter. Katy is really cute. Hey which one of us is the pyromaniac? Just wondering. Now I know you just updated but I would be neglecting duties not to do the following UPDATE SOON! please. Ok gotta go.
Rebellion Author.
6/1/2006 c3 Rebellion Author
Really cool. Well it's good, but the title just doesn't fit the story. Now if it was about grilled cheese sandwiches that fell in love, that would be diffrent. But then that wouldn't be your writing style, more of mine really. Well I gotta go. Please update soon, for everyone who loves this stories sake.
Rebellion Author.
Really cool. Well it's good, but the title just doesn't fit the story. Now if it was about grilled cheese sandwiches that fell in love, that would be diffrent. But then that wouldn't be your writing style, more of mine really. Well I gotta go. Please update soon, for everyone who loves this stories sake.
Rebellion Author.
5/23/2006 c3 Caught By Myself
I like John because he's, how do I put it, cute in a clueless sort of way. :) Maria sounds like a nice girl, too, although I have a feeling something might come up between her and Dennis soon. I dunno. It's just me and my addiction to lovers and conflicts. Rox is cool, and seems very out of John's league... which makes things more interesting ::wink wink::
I like John because he's, how do I put it, cute in a clueless sort of way. :) Maria sounds like a nice girl, too, although I have a feeling something might come up between her and Dennis soon. I dunno. It's just me and my addiction to lovers and conflicts. Rox is cool, and seems very out of John's league... which makes things more interesting ::wink wink::
5/20/2006 c1 Caught By Myself
"Dang"! Hehehe... John's quite the character... I'm gonna go see where this goes...
"Dang"! Hehehe... John's quite the character... I'm gonna go see where this goes...
5/19/2006 c2 4zephyr deity
Hmm, still no clue about why this is in the romance genre though I admire your way of writing.
4zephyr deityHmm, still no clue about why this is in the romance genre though I admire your way of writing.
5/19/2006 c1 zephyr deity
I like the description though the first chapter doesn't supply much, onto the next chapter! I'm curious to see where this is going.
I like the description though the first chapter doesn't supply much, onto the next chapter! I'm curious to see where this is going.