for I once had love11/18/2007 c1 
9Delta Echoes
That's so sweet, I absolutely loved it. I've ran out of words now but I loved it... as I've already stated.
9Delta EchoesThat's so sweet, I absolutely loved it. I've ran out of words now but I loved it... as I've already stated.
7/1/2006 c1 11squeaky314
I like it when poems rhyme and still make sense, which you did. It almost sounds Shakespearean in some parts, too. Well done.
11squeaky314I like it when poems rhyme and still make sense, which you did. It almost sounds Shakespearean in some parts, too. Well done.
6/14/2006 c1 13Dawnella
Wow. I read the first four lines and I was just...wow.Yep. This is really good. I mean, you must have a gift or something, because it flows really well. And even using ne'er it's good. Although I got kind of weirded out with 'spake.' Ah well, it's beautiful, and I can feel the emotion. I love it.
13DawnellaWow. I read the first four lines and I was just...wow.Yep. This is really good. I mean, you must have a gift or something, because it flows really well. And even using ne'er it's good. Although I got kind of weirded out with 'spake.' Ah well, it's beautiful, and I can feel the emotion. I love it.
6/3/2006 c1 41jbchick84
Wow, thats a pretty sweet poem. Thanks for reading mine and reviewing it! Though, to me its not really sad, more like something I've come to accept over time. And like yours, its done, its in the past, its over. Anyways thanks again!
41jbchick84Wow, thats a pretty sweet poem. Thanks for reading mine and reviewing it! Though, to me its not really sad, more like something I've come to accept over time. And like yours, its done, its in the past, its over. Anyways thanks again!
5/28/2006 c1 3forks-and-bayonets
i REALLY like this. I totally relate to it bwahahah. except my scene was on a starry night sky on a chapel's cliff looking down upon the ocean and the beach side. :D
3forks-and-bayonetsi REALLY like this. I totally relate to it bwahahah. except my scene was on a starry night sky on a chapel's cliff looking down upon the ocean and the beach side. :D
5/13/2006 c1 18Nessuno
Perfect description. I can see you. I can see myself. You make it universal enough for all to accept yet personal enough to give it meaning. Nice.
18NessunoPerfect description. I can see you. I can see myself. You make it universal enough for all to accept yet personal enough to give it meaning. Nice.
5/12/2006 c1 Oh fuck this
Wow, lots of feeling- and seems real. "For you a hundred times I'd die" That's a good line. Why did you delete all your other stuff?
- Jonas
Wow, lots of feeling- and seems real. "For you a hundred times I'd die" That's a good line. Why did you delete all your other stuff?
- Jonas
5/9/2006 c1 14O.r.i.g.i.n.a.l.isn't.My.style
...Ah, doesn't love hurt?...-sigh- ...I liked how you used your words and the way you rephrased it. There is a unique style to this poem, well done! Your poem flows well, too. ^^ Good job on this, bravo^^.
14O.r.i.g.i.n.a.l.isn't.My.style...Ah, doesn't love hurt?...-sigh- ...I liked how you used your words and the way you rephrased it. There is a unique style to this poem, well done! Your poem flows well, too. ^^ Good job on this, bravo^^.
5/4/2006 c1 27Socially-Awkward
I like th flow of this...very niceOh and no worries about calling me a guy...just don't let it happen again...lol
27Socially-AwkwardI like th flow of this...very niceOh and no worries about calling me a guy...just don't let it happen again...lol
5/3/2006 c1 27Cait Street
OMFG!This is probably one of the best things you've ever done!I'm so amazed!The emotion was raw and the imagery was so spell binding. I can't get over it. This is so going on my favourites list. Thanks for the reviews by the way =)!I am actually going to england this summer so if there are any sites or anything special that i should see that you can recommend, any unknown treasures i should know about, it'd be great if you could let me know. I was so sad when you went away. I love your writing so much it was sad to see it all dissappeared. This poem really is Fanominal...phanominal...ok well yuo get the meaning.
27Cait StreetOMFG!This is probably one of the best things you've ever done!I'm so amazed!The emotion was raw and the imagery was so spell binding. I can't get over it. This is so going on my favourites list. Thanks for the reviews by the way =)!I am actually going to england this summer so if there are any sites or anything special that i should see that you can recommend, any unknown treasures i should know about, it'd be great if you could let me know. I was so sad when you went away. I love your writing so much it was sad to see it all dissappeared. This poem really is Fanominal...phanominal...ok well yuo get the meaning.