for I once had love5/2/2006 c1 
34Smoky Bear
i like the use of old-world language, it's fitting to theme and gives the poem an air of romantic nostalgia... (ah but if i was military personnel, i couldn't tell you, could i? it might threaten security and then where would we be? lol.)
34Smoky Beari like the use of old-world language, it's fitting to theme and gives the poem an air of romantic nostalgia... (ah but if i was military personnel, i couldn't tell you, could i? it might threaten security and then where would we be? lol.)
5/2/2006 c1 106Windup Hopping Lederhosen
This is such a beautiful poem! I love how you rearranged some lines to make it rhyme. v.v. pretty!
Socially-Awkward is one of my best friends, and a chick. I don't think I'll hook up with her anytime soon. . . hee hee!
106Windup Hopping LederhosenThis is such a beautiful poem! I love how you rearranged some lines to make it rhyme. v.v. pretty!
Socially-Awkward is one of my best friends, and a chick. I don't think I'll hook up with her anytime soon. . . hee hee!
5/1/2006 c1 4skylines
:') sad, but very nice. and too true. excellent work, this is what writers aim for.
4skylines:') sad, but very nice. and too true. excellent work, this is what writers aim for.
5/1/2006 c1 62NoMoreWords
i know this all too well
it's harder when the one you love and the one they love are both people you deeply care about
but life goes on and so must the heartit heals in time
NoMoreWords
62NoMoreWordsi know this all too well
it's harder when the one you love and the one they love are both people you deeply care about
but life goes on and so must the heartit heals in time
NoMoreWords