for The man without a name6/27/2006 c1 
5Joseph Mises
This is a really great poem... I really like it.
What was your inspiration?
Who's the man?
5Joseph MisesThis is a really great poem... I really like it.
What was your inspiration?
Who's the man?
6/21/2006 c1 21THE LAST zHERO
Thats how I feel sometimes. Except...Um...A WOman without a name. By the way, what's your name?I think I might know you...answer in a review or something
21THE LAST zHEROThats how I feel sometimes. Except...Um...A WOman without a name. By the way, what's your name?I think I might know you...answer in a review or something
6/14/2006 c1 13Dawnella
The assassin. Wow, again. As what seems to be usual, it flows easily and gracefully. It's really good.
13DawnellaThe assassin. Wow, again. As what seems to be usual, it flows easily and gracefully. It's really good.
6/5/2006 c1 116searchlight
Oh, mercenary. I love it. Reminds of an anime character I once saw...Was this REALLY your first poem ;)
116searchlightOh, mercenary. I love it. Reminds of an anime character I once saw...Was this REALLY your first poem ;)
5/30/2006 c1 81Princess-anna57
Hello! I like your poem! It's really well written. Excellent work, keep it up.
In response to your pondering, we Aussies spell words english english with our own tweak too! *grins*, thanks for reviewing! Bye for now, and keep being awesome!
~Anna~ ^_^
81Princess-anna57Hello! I like your poem! It's really well written. Excellent work, keep it up.
In response to your pondering, we Aussies spell words english english with our own tweak too! *grins*, thanks for reviewing! Bye for now, and keep being awesome!
~Anna~ ^_^
5/22/2006 c1 213Siph Speigel
A great little poem, I believe it to be written from the heart.
What it reminds me of is the character of Silas, if you've every read The Da Vinci Code. Yeah, it's in the news alot now, but it's a pretty good adventure book.
But this poem fits right to that character. If this comes from the heart, I think you'd like Silas.
213Siph SpeigelA great little poem, I believe it to be written from the heart.
What it reminds me of is the character of Silas, if you've every read The Da Vinci Code. Yeah, it's in the news alot now, but it's a pretty good adventure book.
But this poem fits right to that character. If this comes from the heart, I think you'd like Silas.
5/20/2006 c1 99castelgard
uh.. i think ive read this already from deniable operator. good poem though..
99castelgarduh.. i think ive read this already from deniable operator. good poem though..
5/13/2006 c1 18Nessuno
I like it. I like how you speak of your pride of something and call it what it is. No flowery words or imagery. I respect that.
18NessunoI like it. I like how you speak of your pride of something and call it what it is. No flowery words or imagery. I respect that.
5/12/2006 c1 Oh fuck this
This seems to be written with less emotion than some of your previous pieces. I may be wrong though. I like it a lot, and it's short but to the point. Are you a Marine? It would make more sense if you were.
- Owen and Mark
This seems to be written with less emotion than some of your previous pieces. I may be wrong though. I like it a lot, and it's short but to the point. Are you a Marine? It would make more sense if you were.
- Owen and Mark
5/9/2006 c1 14O.r.i.g.i.n.a.l.isn't.My.style
O.o..Wow, your first poem? (DaNg)... Your poem makes a lot of sense! The lines all set up each other, especially making a good ending. Great job. This was brilliantly(if that's a word) written- a devil from foregin lands, murderous skills give me pride, a pawn, a tool, etc- then a man without a name. It's because of his past and that his real emotion is so deep inside himself that he has no name- well something like that...Anyway, if this was your first poem. You are definetely a natural, and talented writer. Well written poem, bravo!^^
14O.r.i.g.i.n.a.l.isn't.My.styleO.o..Wow, your first poem? (DaNg)... Your poem makes a lot of sense! The lines all set up each other, especially making a good ending. Great job. This was brilliantly(if that's a word) written- a devil from foregin lands, murderous skills give me pride, a pawn, a tool, etc- then a man without a name. It's because of his past and that his real emotion is so deep inside himself that he has no name- well something like that...Anyway, if this was your first poem. You are definetely a natural, and talented writer. Well written poem, bravo!^^
5/3/2006 c1 27Cait Street
oh man...This was your first poem?Its about ten times better than nything i've ever written!Its really great. you really should get your work professionally published.
27Cait Streetoh man...This was your first poem?Its about ten times better than nything i've ever written!Its really great. you really should get your work professionally published.