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1/15/2007 c1 31hurtinfou
This is a good idea for a poem and it makes you ponder.
9/25/2006 c1 41sarah1491
Great poem; nicely written. Please continue to write poetry! :)

‚ô•sarah
8/5/2006 c1 toxic-noodle725
i liked the idea of it. it was very sad for the mystery grl. i can so relate...although im pretty sure alot of ppl can. well done!
7/23/2006 c1 69til-iburnout aka Amanda Helton
interesting...i like it thought...i was sad to come back and find out that you have taken your old stuff down...
5/5/2006 c1 14aaidenkae
lovely. very interesting. im disappointed that you took your other stuff off. will you put it back? please do! thank you-kae
5/2/2006 c1 20sloppy firsts
Hey there! I really like this one, it has a great ring to it. my only suggestion would be to change dancing to dancers in the last stanza.

it's nice to see you writing again, keep at it :)
5/2/2006 c1 65Aquafied
pipedreammakes me think of hawaii.

beautiful butagainmysterious
5/2/2006 c1 zz00
Reminds me of a friend. Nice tone, nice idea. And thanx for the review.:)
5/2/2006 c1 237classic violet
I can so relate. This poem reminds me of my life so much.

Fantastic job, you've captured such essence in this poem. Keep it up!
5/2/2006 c1 1daniel417
very enigmatic...

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