for Mystery Girl8/5/2006 c1 toxic-noodle725
i liked the idea of it. it was very sad for the mystery grl. i can so relate...although im pretty sure alot of ppl can. well done!
i liked the idea of it. it was very sad for the mystery grl. i can so relate...although im pretty sure alot of ppl can. well done!
7/23/2006 c1 
69til-iburnout aka Amanda Helton
interesting...i like it thought...i was sad to come back and find out that you have taken your old stuff down...
69til-iburnout aka Amanda Heltoninteresting...i like it thought...i was sad to come back and find out that you have taken your old stuff down...
5/5/2006 c1 14aaidenkae
lovely. very interesting. im disappointed that you took your other stuff off. will you put it back? please do! thank you-kae
14aaidenkaelovely. very interesting. im disappointed that you took your other stuff off. will you put it back? please do! thank you-kae
5/2/2006 c1 20sloppy firsts
Hey there! I really like this one, it has a great ring to it. my only suggestion would be to change dancing to dancers in the last stanza.
it's nice to see you writing again, keep at it :)
20sloppy firstsHey there! I really like this one, it has a great ring to it. my only suggestion would be to change dancing to dancers in the last stanza.
it's nice to see you writing again, keep at it :)
5/2/2006 c1 237classic violet
I can so relate. This poem reminds me of my life so much.
Fantastic job, you've captured such essence in this poem. Keep it up!
237classic violetI can so relate. This poem reminds me of my life so much.
Fantastic job, you've captured such essence in this poem. Keep it up!