4/8/2009 c10 StoriesAtMidnight
hey, good story! idk if you still have writers block, or your just not continuing the story, but if you do, some ideas... i don't have anything specific, but what you need is a problem in the story, that threatens their relationship or something... idk what exactly, but you had mentioned the guy who raped shay, and there was a guy in the parking lot the time blake was drunk, maybe you could incorporate that somehow... idk, just ideas. but it is a really good story!
hey, good story! idk if you still have writers block, or your just not continuing the story, but if you do, some ideas... i don't have anything specific, but what you need is a problem in the story, that threatens their relationship or something... idk what exactly, but you had mentioned the guy who raped shay, and there was a guy in the parking lot the time blake was drunk, maybe you could incorporate that somehow... idk, just ideas. but it is a really good story!
9/22/2008 c2 RunBabyRun
Beer? Darling, we drink B-52, Sex on the Beach, Absinthe and Champagne! But I guess we're just private school brats! =D.
Wait...IB program schools are prep schools, aren't they? Cause they should be, the amount of homework we get...Ridiculous!
PS. I love your story!
Beer? Darling, we drink B-52, Sex on the Beach, Absinthe and Champagne! But I guess we're just private school brats! =D.
Wait...IB program schools are prep schools, aren't they? Cause they should be, the amount of homework we get...Ridiculous!
PS. I love your story!
8/16/2007 c10 6Carmel March
Ah, I love this story so far. Love it :) You've got great characters, a clever storyline, and a refreshing style of writing. Keep up the amazing work, and update soon!
~Carm~
Ah, I love this story so far. Love it :) You've got great characters, a clever storyline, and a refreshing style of writing. Keep up the amazing work, and update soon!
~Carm~
7/28/2007 c10 Devil's fall
your story is great just right what comes to mind , maybe one of lillys sons the older one is a real pain, or maybe something happens between blake and rayce think of something im sure it will be great. update soon.
your story is great just right what comes to mind , maybe one of lillys sons the older one is a real pain, or maybe something happens between blake and rayce think of something im sure it will be great. update soon.
7/25/2007 c10 SuperCUTEJensen
great chapter...I love it...I cant wait to see what happens next... hope you update soon
great chapter...I love it...I cant wait to see what happens next... hope you update soon
6/14/2007 c9 birdshitftw
YAY! Thank god, moses, zeus, or the coffee god. I thought you just abandoned the story completely (obviously not) please please please post asap to make me and your other readers REALLY happy. I ;give you cake!
caring is creepy
YAY! Thank god, moses, zeus, or the coffee god. I thought you just abandoned the story completely (obviously not) please please please post asap to make me and your other readers REALLY happy. I ;give you cake!
caring is creepy
6/5/2007 c9 2productioncity
Thank you so much for making your time to write this story! ;D
What do you mean about 'adding a new character.' And a HIM?
It better not ruin Rayce and Blakes re-Laysh-mehnn-shipp-uhh! Er, relationship. ^^
Thank You, and stalk youu! Until you update, anyway.
Thank you so much for making your time to write this story! ;D
What do you mean about 'adding a new character.' And a HIM?
It better not ruin Rayce and Blakes re-Laysh-mehnn-shipp-uhh! Er, relationship. ^^
Thank You, and stalk youu! Until you update, anyway.