for Koibito no Ryu10/23/2017 c4 
8Mika Tertius
"I apologize for the distress that my sons have caused you earlier." The elegant woman spoke kindly, her voice clear and soothing. "All three of them."
- LMAO!
I like how she just lumped Tentei in with the other brothers, too.
Tentei's dad's a trip, now I see where the brothers get it from, ha ha.
8Mika Tertius"I apologize for the distress that my sons have caused you earlier." The elegant woman spoke kindly, her voice clear and soothing. "All three of them."
- LMAO!
I like how she just lumped Tentei in with the other brothers, too.
Tentei's dad's a trip, now I see where the brothers get it from, ha ha.
10/23/2017 c3 Mika Tertius
'It felt as if she was missing something important all along, and maybe the encounter had awakened her all-too-human yearning for companionship?'
- For some reason this sentence made me laugh. Maybe because it's so ironically true. It could very well be, in any natural situation, that she was feeling lonely for companionship after studying her bum off at college. However, we all know that it isn't the case.
Oh man, I love Tentei's brothers already. They're something else. I love it.
'It felt as if she was missing something important all along, and maybe the encounter had awakened her all-too-human yearning for companionship?'
- For some reason this sentence made me laugh. Maybe because it's so ironically true. It could very well be, in any natural situation, that she was feeling lonely for companionship after studying her bum off at college. However, we all know that it isn't the case.
Oh man, I love Tentei's brothers already. They're something else. I love it.
10/23/2017 c2 Mika Tertius
And, just like that, Tentei's inner beast has his own theme song in my mind. 'Peaches and cream, I need it cause you know that I'm a fiend ~' I don't know whether to thank the band '112' or not for it, ha ha ha.
( "I was just joking about using me as a landing mat! I don't wish to see you ever again!"
Tentei made no reply to that, and he watched her until she disappeared from sight. It was only after she was long gone did he finally speak for the first time since meeting her, his voice a rich, silky timbre.
"Don't count on it." )
The end of this chapter was brilliant, and very satisfying. I'm officially hooked! Totally gonna binge-read this now, ha ha ha.
And, just like that, Tentei's inner beast has his own theme song in my mind. 'Peaches and cream, I need it cause you know that I'm a fiend ~' I don't know whether to thank the band '112' or not for it, ha ha ha.
( "I was just joking about using me as a landing mat! I don't wish to see you ever again!"
Tentei made no reply to that, and he watched her until she disappeared from sight. It was only after she was long gone did he finally speak for the first time since meeting her, his voice a rich, silky timbre.
"Don't count on it." )
The end of this chapter was brilliant, and very satisfying. I'm officially hooked! Totally gonna binge-read this now, ha ha ha.
8/28/2017 c31 J
Hi! I absolutely love this story! I just read the entire thing this weekend. So much squeee! and feels! and humor! Just want you to know I'm an additional fan! :D :D may I ask if you would be doing the sequel anytime soon? Please please please consider writing about this soon! (Can't stop exclaiming!)
Hi! I absolutely love this story! I just read the entire thing this weekend. So much squeee! and feels! and humor! Just want you to know I'm an additional fan! :D :D may I ask if you would be doing the sequel anytime soon? Please please please consider writing about this soon! (Can't stop exclaiming!)
8/28/2017 c25 Lionturtlefish
OMG... I am having fun reading this... I know it's kinda old and may be a bit too late but where's the sequel?!
OMG... I am having fun reading this... I know it's kinda old and may be a bit too late but where's the sequel?!
2/14/2017 c22 XiZx
So this story is old. I get it. But that hasn't stopped it from becoming literally my favorite story on ficpress. I have read it 5 times now and I am just so in love with these characters. Please please please if you have the sequel anywhere in your brain share it with us! You are an amazing writer and I really want to see more of this story!
So this story is old. I get it. But that hasn't stopped it from becoming literally my favorite story on ficpress. I have read it 5 times now and I am just so in love with these characters. Please please please if you have the sequel anywhere in your brain share it with us! You are an amazing writer and I really want to see more of this story!
2/1/2017 c31 1lover17
This is an amazing story. The characterization and plot is captivating and you are by far an exceptional writer. Your summary and prologue will capture the reader form the start. You have an amazing talent that I hope you will continue to share it with the world in some form. I can not wait to read the rest of your stories as I have just recently discovered your work. Hopefully if you are not already published you will be soon. Also this is a great story for someone who likes a fast paced read. Wonderful Job Paws-Bells
1lover17This is an amazing story. The characterization and plot is captivating and you are by far an exceptional writer. Your summary and prologue will capture the reader form the start. You have an amazing talent that I hope you will continue to share it with the world in some form. I can not wait to read the rest of your stories as I have just recently discovered your work. Hopefully if you are not already published you will be soon. Also this is a great story for someone who likes a fast paced read. Wonderful Job Paws-Bells
1/29/2017 c1 lover17
Wow the prologue already has me on edge! The technique you used really captures the reader form the start. I hope to finish this soon if even if it means a couple sleep deprived days because this is the third book I'm reading.
Wow the prologue already has me on edge! The technique you used really captures the reader form the start. I hope to finish this soon if even if it means a couple sleep deprived days because this is the third book I'm reading.
12/13/2016 c10 Alex Leigh
Ahh! Very good! I'm enjoying this. I actually kinda hope that Sarea stays human, it makes her all the more admirable. Though, gaining abilities from a bond is absolutely reasonable.
Can't wait for the elf lady to find out who Sarea is and why she's there. I have a feeling she's going to regret it. *devious grin*
Ahh! Very good! I'm enjoying this. I actually kinda hope that Sarea stays human, it makes her all the more admirable. Though, gaining abilities from a bond is absolutely reasonable.
Can't wait for the elf lady to find out who Sarea is and why she's there. I have a feeling she's going to regret it. *devious grin*
6/20/2016 c16 elizabethngagne
I have so far no commented because I have had nothing to complain about and since this fic is completed I didn't think that I should. However this chapter toes a very dangerous line that should never be crossed. I'm not sure of the age of the author or anything else but what I do know is that when he started making her throb and using her desire to get the better of and in a way guilt tripping her with the knowledge that he will die if she does not consent to him, you've crossed the line into rape territory. I can tell that you struggled with this chapter somewhat as you tried to take back what he was forcing on her and say hat she gave consent (and she did in the end) but it does not excuse his methods. I would suggest (if you plan to edit this still at all) that you change Tentei's initial seduction methods or cut the first part out all together. It got better but when he tries to force her to have sex with him by showing her pleasure, he is attempting to force her to yield to his demands, willing or not. Otherwise this fic is great so far! Thank you for all the hard work
I have so far no commented because I have had nothing to complain about and since this fic is completed I didn't think that I should. However this chapter toes a very dangerous line that should never be crossed. I'm not sure of the age of the author or anything else but what I do know is that when he started making her throb and using her desire to get the better of and in a way guilt tripping her with the knowledge that he will die if she does not consent to him, you've crossed the line into rape territory. I can tell that you struggled with this chapter somewhat as you tried to take back what he was forcing on her and say hat she gave consent (and she did in the end) but it does not excuse his methods. I would suggest (if you plan to edit this still at all) that you change Tentei's initial seduction methods or cut the first part out all together. It got better but when he tries to force her to have sex with him by showing her pleasure, he is attempting to force her to yield to his demands, willing or not. Otherwise this fic is great so far! Thank you for all the hard work
4/26/2016 c31 Guest
Your story is realy great. Id like to read the sequel!:)
Your story is realy great. Id like to read the sequel!:)
10/28/2015 c23 ixia208
Any chance your're up for sun and nakamura's story? Hehehe just my wishful thinking.
Any chance your're up for sun and nakamura's story? Hehehe just my wishful thinking.