for Koibito no Ryu9/4/2015 c31 Guest
Great story! I love it :) Good work!.
Great story! I love it :) Good work!.
7/6/2015 c12 Gissiie
I love it so far, but I can't help but think that the only reason that Tentei would feel worried for Sarea or feel his heart beating fast, or anything that has to do with romance and love.. is because they're bonded. Like if they already love each other, but because they're forced to. Do they learn to love each other? Or do they just already have all those romantic feelings because of the bond? I feel like his feelings aren't controlled. If he feels enraged at the fact that someone hurts her, it's because it's an instinct, not because he genuinely feels enraged. As if he had not control over his feelings.
I love it so far, but I can't help but think that the only reason that Tentei would feel worried for Sarea or feel his heart beating fast, or anything that has to do with romance and love.. is because they're bonded. Like if they already love each other, but because they're forced to. Do they learn to love each other? Or do they just already have all those romantic feelings because of the bond? I feel like his feelings aren't controlled. If he feels enraged at the fact that someone hurts her, it's because it's an instinct, not because he genuinely feels enraged. As if he had not control over his feelings.
6/8/2015 c31 Guest
This is one of the best fics I have ever read Great Job! ..
This is one of the best fics I have ever read Great Job! ..
5/30/2015 c31 aiyu
neva read sumthing so awsome b4! its certainly an award wining story. i feel as if i m jus transported to their world n everything was hapenning just b4 my very eyes... everything was so much in detail! i m truely impressed... i m a writter myself n i can say that this is what r readers r waiting for! after the 1st time i read it all over again... ;)
keep up the good work!
neva read sumthing so awsome b4! its certainly an award wining story. i feel as if i m jus transported to their world n everything was hapenning just b4 my very eyes... everything was so much in detail! i m truely impressed... i m a writter myself n i can say that this is what r readers r waiting for! after the 1st time i read it all over again... ;)
keep up the good work!
4/11/2015 c31 R
I know you said at the end of this chapter that you would write a sequel... That was nine years ago and still no sequel. So sad, because I really wanna know what happens between Nakamura and Sun. Please write it?
I know you said at the end of this chapter that you would write a sequel... That was nine years ago and still no sequel. So sad, because I really wanna know what happens between Nakamura and Sun. Please write it?
2/23/2015 c31 Fuzzy Slipperz
Please come back! I fell in love with your characters! Please post a preview! Are you going to return to FP? Sorry if I sound demanding, but...PLEASE GET YOUR ASS OFF YOUR COUCH AND POST THE DAMN SEQUEL. :D
As you can obviously tell I can't wait for the sequel, if there will be one... :C I found your story a month ago, and I thoroughly enjoyed reading it during that time. It's a shame you haven't posted in 8 years, because I can tell a lot of people miss you. Including myself. Even though I just found you on FP, it seems as though you aren't here anymore. (please prove me wrong!)
I love your sense of humor and you made me laugh sooo many times. Sadly I'm fairly new to FP so I don't know how to PM you, so hopefully one day you'll see this message while scrolling through your old FP acount. And you did leave us with many loose ends, and you haven't tied them up for the past 8 years so... hope that's gonna remind you people are expecting a sequel. Unless you died in the past 8 years hears a message, DON'T LEAVE US HANGING!
Please come back! I fell in love with your characters! Please post a preview! Are you going to return to FP? Sorry if I sound demanding, but...PLEASE GET YOUR ASS OFF YOUR COUCH AND POST THE DAMN SEQUEL. :D
As you can obviously tell I can't wait for the sequel, if there will be one... :C I found your story a month ago, and I thoroughly enjoyed reading it during that time. It's a shame you haven't posted in 8 years, because I can tell a lot of people miss you. Including myself. Even though I just found you on FP, it seems as though you aren't here anymore. (please prove me wrong!)
I love your sense of humor and you made me laugh sooo many times. Sadly I'm fairly new to FP so I don't know how to PM you, so hopefully one day you'll see this message while scrolling through your old FP acount. And you did leave us with many loose ends, and you haven't tied them up for the past 8 years so... hope that's gonna remind you people are expecting a sequel. Unless you died in the past 8 years hears a message, DON'T LEAVE US HANGING!
2/20/2015 c20 Guest
Little Cam so cute yet so sad!
Little Cam so cute yet so sad!
2/16/2015 c31 Guest
You should put up the sequel. I look forward to seeing how the fox handles things.
You should put up the sequel. I look forward to seeing how the fox handles things.
2/16/2015 c8 Guest
Looovvee!
Looovvee!
2/15/2015 c2 Guest
I love guys with long hair!
I love guys with long hair!
1/14/2015 c31 opera123
your writing talent is humbling
I want to thank you for sharing your talent to write.
I loved you story and will probably reread it repeatedly for as long as it is posted.
The story was original and extremely well thoughtout in character and plot development.
your writing talent is humbling
I want to thank you for sharing your talent to write.
I loved you story and will probably reread it repeatedly for as long as it is posted.
The story was original and extremely well thoughtout in character and plot development.
1/12/2015 c5 Guest
i don't like your fic, no no no.
i am in love with it
seriously need to publish
i don't like your fic, no no no.
i am in love with it
seriously need to publish
1/12/2015 c3 Guest
your writer skills are sharp as blade, looking forward to more chapters
your writer skills are sharp as blade, looking forward to more chapters
1/12/2015 c2 Guest
just wanted to read something for free one night and found your story online
its amazing, but i think u already know that
just wanted to read something for free one night and found your story online
its amazing, but i think u already know that