for Freaks to you: Adam's Story5/30/2006 c3 Sam
You're welcome. To answer your question: Yes, Adam had everything to do with that video. I think he didn't expect to end up falling for Jessica so maybe he had second thoughts but he didn't stop it either. I think he would rather please his friends than do what's right. Thanks for updating.
You're welcome. To answer your question: Yes, Adam had everything to do with that video. I think he didn't expect to end up falling for Jessica so maybe he had second thoughts but he didn't stop it either. I think he would rather please his friends than do what's right. Thanks for updating.
5/30/2006 c3 lucy
if it were for my you should lock yourslef in a room and write all day long, and nothing else -ewll talking to me-.i think u need to finsh freaks, but don't forget about the others!and i'm impatient to hear about the story of the teacher and the boy, at least hear a lil more.
keep on writing! please don't stop, i want to read the last part of adam's pov and of course the end of freaks!love you
if it were for my you should lock yourslef in a room and write all day long, and nothing else -ewll talking to me-.i think u need to finsh freaks, but don't forget about the others!and i'm impatient to hear about the story of the teacher and the boy, at least hear a lil more.
keep on writing! please don't stop, i want to read the last part of adam's pov and of course the end of freaks!love you
5/30/2006 c3 uggabugga
I really think he did, i mean how could he not of there was just a camera there that taped everything and happened to be on, no way he had everything to do with it.he was an ass and played with her too much but that dosent change the fact that i still think they should end up together.she should just play with him a lil,well its up to you of course
great chap,i just hope next ones longer!
update this and freaks soon ^.^
I really think he did, i mean how could he not of there was just a camera there that taped everything and happened to be on, no way he had everything to do with it.he was an ass and played with her too much but that dosent change the fact that i still think they should end up together.she should just play with him a lil,well its up to you of course
great chap,i just hope next ones longer!
update this and freaks soon ^.^
5/29/2006 c3 princess max
Nice description of her clothing. Ouch, pierced nipples.
Nice description of her clothing. Ouch, pierced nipples.
5/26/2006 c2 lucy
i thought i had left a review for adam's pov. i was wrong.well this reminds me why i hate him so much keep updating it!
besos!
i thought i had left a review for adam's pov. i was wrong.well this reminds me why i hate him so much keep updating it!
besos!
275/10/2006 c2 Sam
Adam is just cruel and he is the initiator of all the bullying and pranks. He likes Jessica but he is going at it in a barbaric kind of way. What a loser. Thanks for updating.
Adam is just cruel and he is the initiator of all the bullying and pranks. He likes Jessica but he is going at it in a barbaric kind of way. What a loser. Thanks for updating.
5/9/2006 c2 uggabugga
Aww hes such an ass! lol
keep writing this i really like it...but I hate slutsie! lol
Great chap!
Kelly
Aww hes such an ass! lol
keep writing this i really like it...but I hate slutsie! lol
Great chap!
Kelly
5/9/2006 c2 princess max
We spread those copies all over the place, the most embarrassing and personal parts we put up all around the school. Your mom pulled them all down with Amanda. We laughed at her and read out loud her poems in class.
I could kill him.
We spread those copies all over the place, the most embarrassing and personal parts we put up all around the school. Your mom pulled them all down with Amanda. We laughed at her and read out loud her poems in class.
I could kill him.
5/4/2006 c1 uggabugga
AW! O mah Goodd!I absolutly LOVE you right now!Yay we get to read Jake's side of the story...I think its soo sweet that he's talking to the baby!Aw(i know i already said it) I knew he really loved her!
AW! O mah Goodd!I absolutly LOVE you right now!Yay we get to read Jake's side of the story...I think its soo sweet that he's talking to the baby!Aw(i know i already said it) I knew he really loved her!
5/4/2006 c1 Sam
Good start and Adam is such an ass. I even feel sorry for Susie but no more than what he did to Jessica. Thanks for posting this.
Good start and Adam is such an ass. I even feel sorry for Susie but no more than what he did to Jessica. Thanks for posting this.