
3/19/2008 c1 thornexofxroses
that kinda reminds me of a bad realationship. not i hate you type bad, but like stalkerish. yet not... i dunno what i was talking about. maybe when iremember i'll re-review
that kinda reminds me of a bad realationship. not i hate you type bad, but like stalkerish. yet not... i dunno what i was talking about. maybe when iremember i'll re-review
9/2/2006 c1
41sarah1491
This poem is very emotional... (and kind of disturbing.. no offense.) It make3s me feel sad. I hope it is not true or based on your real thoughts. If you have made the whole thing up than you have serious skill. It seems so real!
P.S. Thanks for the reviews & favorites list add!

This poem is very emotional... (and kind of disturbing.. no offense.) It make3s me feel sad. I hope it is not true or based on your real thoughts. If you have made the whole thing up than you have serious skill. It seems so real!
P.S. Thanks for the reviews & favorites list add!
5/4/2006 c1
1k+Faithless Juliet
I loved how the perspective of the action changed from your view of doing it and their view of watching you do it. Skilled transition. Keep up the good work.
Much love,Juliet.

I loved how the perspective of the action changed from your view of doing it and their view of watching you do it. Skilled transition. Keep up the good work.
Much love,Juliet.