for When You're No Longer Here6/5/2006 c1 
11Autumnymph
I DO wish I can appreciate poems more. But I guess I just can't 'feel' for the poem. I won't say 'great!' or 'beautiful!' anymore because I think that's lying when I really don't feel anything.
But if I do say it next time, it means I understand and truly feel for it ^^ And don't feel bad, the problem's with me, not you =)
11AutumnymphI DO wish I can appreciate poems more. But I guess I just can't 'feel' for the poem. I won't say 'great!' or 'beautiful!' anymore because I think that's lying when I really don't feel anything.
But if I do say it next time, it means I understand and truly feel for it ^^ And don't feel bad, the problem's with me, not you =)
5/11/2006 c1 20Once in a blue moon
The use of question marks was very successful in creating the mood of the poem. It had me leaning forward a little bit, hoping for an answer to the not-really-question questions.
20Once in a blue moonThe use of question marks was very successful in creating the mood of the poem. It had me leaning forward a little bit, hoping for an answer to the not-really-question questions.
5/10/2006 c1 241Werewolf Nighteyes
Never mind the fact that teen angst is overrated, this comes across quite nicely. Though for some reason it sounds like lyrics to a punk band's ballad to me, it guess it works as a poem too. Which is good.
Keep it up. ;)
241Werewolf NighteyesNever mind the fact that teen angst is overrated, this comes across quite nicely. Though for some reason it sounds like lyrics to a punk band's ballad to me, it guess it works as a poem too. Which is good.
Keep it up. ;)
5/7/2006 c1 51Artemis Obscure
At first instance thought it was a sad breakup poem.
and these lines blew me away;
/And was it all just a dream?Or reality bent?What difference does it make?When you're no longer here./
51Artemis ObscureAt first instance thought it was a sad breakup poem.
and these lines blew me away;
/And was it all just a dream?Or reality bent?What difference does it make?When you're no longer here./
5/5/2006 c1 30Drizit
Dood! You effing promised me that you'd review Talking Things! You F*! I am reviewing this one so you can review me. Capish?
Anyway, like the girl said (I think the reviewer was a girl...) Beautiful and sad. i can feel the emotions flowing from keyboard to page and from page to people. Of course, you've heard this many times but what's another one?
Awesome!
30DrizitDood! You effing promised me that you'd review Talking Things! You F*! I am reviewing this one so you can review me. Capish?
Anyway, like the girl said (I think the reviewer was a girl...) Beautiful and sad. i can feel the emotions flowing from keyboard to page and from page to people. Of course, you've heard this many times but what's another one?
Awesome!