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1/14/2008 c1 1relapse into change
i like this poem. it's was alright.

truthfully i thought it was pretty cliche but who

am i to talk. the rhymes seemed a little forced and i really

never found a liking to poems that rhyme alot. and maybe

some imagery would be good. i dunno. i don't like the

ending i'm sorry to say i just though i could of been better

and just know i'm not saying this poem is bad it's good

i just..it's pretty cliche and nothing about it really...

jumps out at you. i'm sorry i'm really not trying to be mean

or harsh..it was good.
7/3/2006 c1 34Nine-Black-Roses
this is really gd poem. but i thort tht in sum bits were u try to rhyme kinda made it less good. (excuse my crap english).you point emotion and message is clear thowell donex
6/28/2006 c1 113Travis C. Eckert
"I suffocating," maybe to I'm, otherwise good by me.
6/5/2006 c1 81Princess-anna57
Hey you! *grins*

I heart your poem! I thought I reviewed this earlier, lol, obviously not! ^_^ You're awesome darl, keep writing!

~Anna~ ^_^
5/13/2006 c1 15charedice
this is cool; if anything, the only problem seems to be the lst two lines; whenever I read it I want to make them 'I just can't believe/ you left me to die'. just a thought. apart from that, really nice work.
5/5/2006 c1 103heartbroken922
i loved it! and i loved the last sentence. and i loved your rhyming. lol you did a lovely job.
5/5/2006 c1 31poemkitten7
Aw, this is so sad and pretty. I can totally relate. Lovely write. Keep it up! ^_^
5/5/2006 c1 123Black and White Dreams
aw... i know how that feels... sad... -Black and White Dreams
5/5/2006 c1 72angel953
this is very interesting i think it has a good idea in mind but i don't think it's finished. i don't know just a thought

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