for Dream Place5/10/2006 c1 
38xRayne
Oh wow. This was amazing. I love you. Just wow. I loved it so much, that I can't figure out how to make this review of use...on my favorites ot goes!
38xRayneOh wow. This was amazing. I love you. Just wow. I loved it so much, that I can't figure out how to make this review of use...on my favorites ot goes!
5/6/2006 c1 DELETE DELETE DELETE ACCOUNT
this is really nice... i really like this type of poetry... its going on my faves... read one of mine called "My Haven"
this is really nice... i really like this type of poetry... its going on my faves... read one of mine called "My Haven"
5/6/2006 c1 41discombobulator
A good poem, but you rhyme one time (over tea...never to be) which throws off the rhythm. Also, the lines after "As Hades himself..." seem to be out of rhythm.
41discombobulatorA good poem, but you rhyme one time (over tea...never to be) which throws off the rhythm. Also, the lines after "As Hades himself..." seem to be out of rhythm.
5/6/2006 c1 138simply meg
I liked this. it flows and sounds almost like a song but not quite, Write On!
138simply megI liked this. it flows and sounds almost like a song but not quite, Write On!