
1/10/2011 c2
4sunnybunny17
I love this story! It gas plot, characters, mystery, drama, and romance. Spectacular! You're writing is really good, too.
Update son(:
-brooke

I love this story! It gas plot, characters, mystery, drama, and romance. Spectacular! You're writing is really good, too.
Update son(:
-brooke
12/28/2009 c2 ShootingStarsAren'tMagical
It's been a while since a story captivated my attention like this one has. I hope you update...SOON.
It's been a while since a story captivated my attention like this one has. I hope you update...SOON.
5/4/2008 c2 D-Mish
I really like this idea (ps, the summary totally captivated my attention, double thumbs up). The way you have written these chapters is efficent. One thing i dont like about the story is that she was once inlove with him and is unsure about her feelings for him now. I think it should have been shes over him, or they never exsisted. Or even that he loves her, but wont betray his brother or something. PPLEASE update this, im keen to know what happens!
I really like this idea (ps, the summary totally captivated my attention, double thumbs up). The way you have written these chapters is efficent. One thing i dont like about the story is that she was once inlove with him and is unsure about her feelings for him now. I think it should have been shes over him, or they never exsisted. Or even that he loves her, but wont betray his brother or something. PPLEASE update this, im keen to know what happens!
12/6/2007 c2
1glamoureste
ADJfksal fjdkl;saj; lf ;!
OH MY GOD!
WHERE HAVE YOU BEEN?
update soon, pretty please? it's been so long... :[
and i think this story is gonna turn out REALLY well.

ADJfksal fjdkl;saj; lf ;!
OH MY GOD!
WHERE HAVE YOU BEEN?
update soon, pretty please? it's been so long... :[
and i think this story is gonna turn out REALLY well.
9/22/2007 c2
1EasilyDamaged
Oh no! It makes me so sad to see you haven't updated this in over a year. =( It's brilliant, honestly. So refreshing! Plus I adore Chase, but I'm sure I'd love Shane even more if you started to introduce the character. I hope someday you'll get the motivation to update this again! It's truly refreshing to read.

Oh no! It makes me so sad to see you haven't updated this in over a year. =( It's brilliant, honestly. So refreshing! Plus I adore Chase, but I'm sure I'd love Shane even more if you started to introduce the character. I hope someday you'll get the motivation to update this again! It's truly refreshing to read.
9/9/2007 c2 mer-person
ahh..its been a year since you updated this. pleaseplease tell me you will continue with it, i want to see where it is heading!
ahh..its been a year since you updated this. pleaseplease tell me you will continue with it, i want to see where it is heading!
5/20/2007 c2 enigmatic.allure
i really enjoy the story! so update! LOL i noticed that you included Noah from your other story "Catch Me...", so would the characters of the stories be involved in each other's lives? I understand if you haven't been able to update cuz it's still during the school year but please update when summers come!(^_^)
i really enjoy the story! so update! LOL i noticed that you included Noah from your other story "Catch Me...", so would the characters of the stories be involved in each other's lives? I understand if you haven't been able to update cuz it's still during the school year but please update when summers come!(^_^)
1/7/2007 c2
1RayRay and Beanzie
hiyaa..awesome story..seems very interesting and i cant wait to meet this Shane..heh..anyways keep up the great work and please update son! ciao

hiyaa..awesome story..seems very interesting and i cant wait to meet this Shane..heh..anyways keep up the great work and please update son! ciao