for You Do Not Listen5/28/2006 c1 
27HgBookworm
Very nice poem. I did like the twist at the end... It added much originality to this piece. Good luck with your writing in the future. -HgBookworm
27HgBookwormVery nice poem. I did like the twist at the end... It added much originality to this piece. Good luck with your writing in the future. -HgBookworm
5/9/2006 c1 2ColorfulHearts
Wow! I almost thought it was someone who is hearbroken. I like how you choose your words.
2ColorfulHeartsWow! I almost thought it was someone who is hearbroken. I like how you choose your words.
5/8/2006 c1 68SnoDragon
*laughs* I love it! Especially that line at the end. At first I thought it was going to be another of those over-the-top "I've lost my love and now I'm depressed"-type poems. How glad I was that it was something much better!
Well done.
68SnoDragon*laughs* I love it! Especially that line at the end. At first I thought it was going to be another of those over-the-top "I've lost my love and now I'm depressed"-type poems. How glad I was that it was something much better!
Well done.
5/7/2006 c1 152xoxoMizzatxoxo
You were right about the ending. Very good job. Please read and review.
152xoxoMizzatxoxoYou were right about the ending. Very good job. Please read and review.