
10/22/2007 c1 Waffle Rocket
Wow. This poem is absolutely amazing. I love the way it flows and the feeling you put into it. You put a lot of thought into this, huh? It's beautiful, and so deep. I'm sure you did great for the class.
Wow. This poem is absolutely amazing. I love the way it flows and the feeling you put into it. You put a lot of thought into this, huh? It's beautiful, and so deep. I'm sure you did great for the class.
2/11/2007 c1
2loves philosophy
WOW. Intense poem. I give you props, I could never write anything so beautiful:]
-janene

WOW. Intense poem. I give you props, I could never write anything so beautiful:]
-janene
12/21/2006 c1
3miss-blackhair
whoa.
i love this. very deep. i need sometime to digest and dig into the poem. cool. it's a very fascinating perspective.

whoa.
i love this. very deep. i need sometime to digest and dig into the poem. cool. it's a very fascinating perspective.
8/22/2006 c1
2vampy08
it flows together and I like that in a peom. Love it.
Thanks for the review hope you keep reviewig. hint hint lol

it flows together and I like that in a peom. Love it.
Thanks for the review hope you keep reviewig. hint hint lol
7/1/2006 c1
3sinfullyours
wow i really liked this poem, it felt mad deep. and while i was reading it, it felt rather flowy and dream like. i liked that.
i bet u got an a =]!
good job

wow i really liked this poem, it felt mad deep. and while i was reading it, it felt rather flowy and dream like. i liked that.
i bet u got an a =]!
good job
5/22/2006 c1
6Frost Cry
Hey!
The words you choose are perfect. You really set the mood and paint your images effectively! Good job! I enjoyed reading this.
One note: that shape what I am, see, here, and feel. ('here' should be 'hear')

Hey!
The words you choose are perfect. You really set the mood and paint your images effectively! Good job! I enjoyed reading this.
One note: that shape what I am, see, here, and feel. ('here' should be 'hear')
5/19/2006 c1
132mizu no kokoro
if only life was that simple^^ the quote in there rings quite true. good work

if only life was that simple^^ the quote in there rings quite true. good work
5/14/2006 c1 criti-sized
This was a very nice poem, not one that is found alot which makes it better, because it's genuine.
I hope though that you continue to write poems or anything in general.
This was a very nice poem, not one that is found alot which makes it better, because it's genuine.
I hope though that you continue to write poems or anything in general.