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for I am from Simplicity

10/22/2007 c1 Waffle Rocket
Wow. This poem is absolutely amazing. I love the way it flows and the feeling you put into it. You put a lot of thought into this, huh? It's beautiful, and so deep. I'm sure you did great for the class.
2/11/2007 c1 11Living.My.Life.My.Way
u have that rite...good job!
2/11/2007 c1 2loves philosophy
WOW. Intense poem. I give you props, I could never write anything so beautiful:]

12/21/2006 c1 3miss-blackhair

i love this. very deep. i need sometime to digest and dig into the poem. cool. it's a very fascinating perspective.
11/20/2006 c1 3Da Vinci at Work
Interesting poem. I like it.
10/29/2006 c1 1N. Phoenix
Really interesting poem, i liked it. Thanks again for reviewing my story
8/22/2006 c1 2vampy08
it flows together and I like that in a peom. Love it.

Thanks for the review hope you keep reviewig. hint hint lol
7/1/2006 c1 3sinfullyours
wow i really liked this poem, it felt mad deep. and while i was reading it, it felt rather flowy and dream like. i liked that.

i bet u got an a =]!

good job
5/22/2006 c1 6Frost Cry

The words you choose are perfect. You really set the mood and paint your images effectively! Good job! I enjoyed reading this.

One note: that shape what I am, see, here, and feel. ('here' should be 'hear')
5/21/2006 c1 26autumn berrington
i love it! pleaz write more! ^_^

thanx for the review

5/19/2006 c1 132mizu no kokoro
if only life was that simple^^ the quote in there rings quite true. good work
5/14/2006 c1 criti-sized
This was a very nice poem, not one that is found alot which makes it better, because it's genuine.

I hope though that you continue to write poems or anything in general.

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