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5/12/2006 c1 29Predak
It might help if you think of this poem as if you were being born.

For four seasons, the title was an expression of the four seasons in a person's life. It was supposed to be very abstract, just giving more feeling than thought. Yes, thanks for catching the Time capitalization.

In Diluted Dreams, it is meant to be "passed light". It is a smoking reference. To give a detachment from reality, hence it gave life to new shadows.
5/12/2006 c1 29Katterree Fengari
I like the rhyme scheme on this one. I don't understand the line "Echoing of raptures walls-protect"- it's unclear. The "egg" and "reborn" makes me think of a phoenix, but until the last lines I thought you might be doing something like 'from the point of view of an egg used for an omelot'...anyway, this poem makes a strong case, good.

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