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7/12/2006 c1 26Rob Roy '03
Rhyming poetry! It's a wonderful poem conceptually, if the rhythm feels a bit off to me in places. The third stanza, perhaps, could begin "Never saying a thing / They let Radio sing"; as for the stanza's last line, I'm sure its rhythm could be improved,but I have no idea how. Apart from little nitpicking like that, it's a very nice poem and a wonderful concept. Cheers!~ Rob
6/6/2006 c1 5darknessblooms
Cute. I like this...very original.

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