for Rhythms2/28/2007 c1 
5Queen of Not Much
o... rhythm-ie! i was thrilled to read it!
Push and Pull
Rise and Fall
Twist and Turn
Rhythms all
beautiful!
5Queen of Not Mucho... rhythm-ie! i was thrilled to read it!
Push and Pull
Rise and Fall
Twist and Turn
Rhythms all
beautiful!
9/1/2006 c1 Rosie
very nice poem. to me elegance is in simplicity. you encompass big ideas with few words. i've read a few other things you wrote and you have a lot of heart. poetic theory can be learned, but you've gotta have the heart. keep it up!
very nice poem. to me elegance is in simplicity. you encompass big ideas with few words. i've read a few other things you wrote and you have a lot of heart. poetic theory can be learned, but you've gotta have the heart. keep it up!
8/31/2006 c1 STEPH
i just had a hard day and i felt better after reading this one...reminds me just to go with the flow, the rhtyhms, and when things get a bit dark, well, at least we know they will swing back to the light in time.
(i am a friend of sis/stella)
i just had a hard day and i felt better after reading this one...reminds me just to go with the flow, the rhtyhms, and when things get a bit dark, well, at least we know they will swing back to the light in time.
(i am a friend of sis/stella)
5/11/2006 c1 130b-U-b-TRUE
hey. I liked that, I just didn't like the exclamation mark at then end. i thought that took away from the seriousness of the piece. Otherwise, brilliant job!Kim
130b-U-b-TRUEhey. I liked that, I just didn't like the exclamation mark at then end. i thought that took away from the seriousness of the piece. Otherwise, brilliant job!Kim