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2/28/2007 c1 5Queen of Not Much
o... rhythm-ie! i was thrilled to read it!

Push and Pull

Rise and Fall

Twist and Turn

Rhythms all

beautiful!
9/1/2006 c1 Rosie
very nice poem. to me elegance is in simplicity. you encompass big ideas with few words. i've read a few other things you wrote and you have a lot of heart. poetic theory can be learned, but you've gotta have the heart. keep it up!
8/31/2006 c1 STEPH
i just had a hard day and i felt better after reading this one...reminds me just to go with the flow, the rhtyhms, and when things get a bit dark, well, at least we know they will swing back to the light in time.

(i am a friend of sis/stella)
5/11/2006 c1 130b-U-b-TRUE
hey. I liked that, I just didn't like the exclamation mark at then end. i thought that took away from the seriousness of the piece. Otherwise, brilliant job!Kim
5/11/2006 c1 16Cloudsinthesky
very cute, i like it a lot.

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