for What I Want5/13/2006 c1 
91son of frost
It seems to me that your relationship is experiencing a little turbulance. I hope that everything works out and goes well for you. I can't say I have any advice really, I've never been sure if I've done the right thing, or should've done something different. Good poem.
91son of frostIt seems to me that your relationship is experiencing a little turbulance. I hope that everything works out and goes well for you. I can't say I have any advice really, I've never been sure if I've done the right thing, or should've done something different. Good poem.
5/11/2006 c1 6a falling star
OMG. this is like EXACTLY how i feel right now/how i've felt for a while... you did an amazing job of putting this into words && i love this. great work! keep writing.
-fallingxstars
6a falling starOMG. this is like EXACTLY how i feel right now/how i've felt for a while... you did an amazing job of putting this into words && i love this. great work! keep writing.
-fallingxstars
5/11/2006 c1 92burning in effigy
Absolutely love how you formatted this, with the beginning repeating. Makes it seem like the person is confused and/or unable to really experss their emotions, and I like how you can show the person's uncertainty/ nervousness(?)
Great job!
92burning in effigyAbsolutely love how you formatted this, with the beginning repeating. Makes it seem like the person is confused and/or unable to really experss their emotions, and I like how you can show the person's uncertainty/ nervousness(?)
Great job!
5/11/2006 c1 197the Stranger in the moonlight
This was really awesome. I like the contradiction of wants every other line. Great job.
Keep writing!
~the Stranger in the moonlight~
197the Stranger in the moonlightThis was really awesome. I like the contradiction of wants every other line. Great job.
Keep writing!
~the Stranger in the moonlight~