for My Dieing Soldier5/12/2006 c1 
17Sunshine Lust
ooh, beautiful like a song. Love the poem, love the concept - (You can just imagine the soldier's wife, tearful-eyed, holding the letter that says...) - yeah. Hearts n stuff. But it's my DUTY (!) to point out that it's -dying-, not -dieing-, lawl. Unless you're coloring your hair. Then it would be DYEING. ;3
*grammar Nazi!* Anyway, thanks for writing this :D
17Sunshine Lustooh, beautiful like a song. Love the poem, love the concept - (You can just imagine the soldier's wife, tearful-eyed, holding the letter that says...) - yeah. Hearts n stuff. But it's my DUTY (!) to point out that it's -dying-, not -dieing-, lawl. Unless you're coloring your hair. Then it would be DYEING. ;3
*grammar Nazi!* Anyway, thanks for writing this :D