for Pandora's Box6/1/2006 c1 anapmyour
ah...teenage angst. and yet somehow rather idealist. i'm not sure that I agree with the message, but it's a good poem and well written. I'm just a total cynic and don't believe in the idealist vision of the world. there's some interesting line breaks, but in some places I feel that the line breaks take away little bit from the message. it works very well though in the second and third stanzas
ah...teenage angst. and yet somehow rather idealist. i'm not sure that I agree with the message, but it's a good poem and well written. I'm just a total cynic and don't believe in the idealist vision of the world. there's some interesting line breaks, but in some places I feel that the line breaks take away little bit from the message. it works very well though in the second and third stanzas
5/18/2006 c1 
6Faun's Foot
This is a very good poem - it reminds me of Dante Gabriel Rosetti's painting of Pandora (which is beautiful - if you haven't seen it, you should). More to the point, I like the rythm and the message of the poeam. Good work. :)
6Faun's FootThis is a very good poem - it reminds me of Dante Gabriel Rosetti's painting of Pandora (which is beautiful - if you haven't seen it, you should). More to the point, I like the rythm and the message of the poeam. Good work. :)