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6/1/2006 c1 anapmyour
ah...teenage angst. and yet somehow rather idealist. i'm not sure that I agree with the message, but it's a good poem and well written. I'm just a total cynic and don't believe in the idealist vision of the world. there's some interesting line breaks, but in some places I feel that the line breaks take away little bit from the message. it works very well though in the second and third stanzas
5/18/2006 c1 6Faun's Foot
This is a very good poem - it reminds me of Dante Gabriel Rosetti's painting of Pandora (which is beautiful - if you haven't seen it, you should). More to the point, I like the rythm and the message of the poeam. Good work. :)

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