for My voice of inhibition5/12/2006 c1 
92randompoetry
Hmm, theres a quirkiness about it that I like. I also liked how the last two lines got deeper than the rest of the poem. Good job.
92randompoetryHmm, theres a quirkiness about it that I like. I also liked how the last two lines got deeper than the rest of the poem. Good job.