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5/19/2006 c3 29Mad-4-Manga
O.ONICE! ! !

i could SO see this as a song!VEry nice.Continue to write!

In this poem, you did keep a good theme going, but still work more on bringing out feeling in others.
5/19/2006 c2 Mad-4-Manga
0,0I'm not going to kid you here,You may be better off just writing poetry. This is really good! ^_^But work some more on keeping a general theme so people can keep track.
5/14/2006 c1 Mad-4-Manga
*HUGS*

*sniff-sniff*I understand where you're coming from *wipes tears from eyes*

I like your poems! ^_^! *GLOMP*

Tip: Spell things correctly! Spare some time for editing! I know you're lazy and don't like to be bothered about it, but at least care enough about how people approach your stories and poems to edit! People don't like to try and understand stuff they can't because it's spelled wrong and the commas and periods are misplaced or aren't there.
5/13/2006 c1 19xpirateslifex
i like it...you really just summed up probably what a lot of people feel like...keep it up...

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