for Giving Up1/12/2014 c3 R
Your writing is good, but in what world would The Ring and The Village be considered scary? Neither one of them was particularly horrific or even good for that matter...
Your writing is good, but in what world would The Ring and The Village be considered scary? Neither one of them was particularly horrific or even good for that matter...
12/7/2013 c19 thatweirdgurl97
You've not been really descriptive of Dylan and Libby's "getting together" or their relationship. As much as i would've liked more information about it, I have to admit I would've been even more pissed off if you made Skylar end up with Libby. Though I did know from the the start that Dylan would be just perfect with her! Due to the non-descriptive part mentioned above, not one of my most favourite stories but I gotta say... One hell of a Story! :)
You've not been really descriptive of Dylan and Libby's "getting together" or their relationship. As much as i would've liked more information about it, I have to admit I would've been even more pissed off if you made Skylar end up with Libby. Though I did know from the the start that Dylan would be just perfect with her! Due to the non-descriptive part mentioned above, not one of my most favourite stories but I gotta say... One hell of a Story! :)
2/17/2013 c19 
1silverbird125
Great story. I read this before I just thought I'd try again. Amazing, I loved it! Thank you for sharing!
1silverbird125Great story. I read this before I just thought I'd try again. Amazing, I loved it! Thank you for sharing!
12/6/2012 c19 brinalovesyouxx
Naaww :) such a cute story.. I love it! Another one of your well writeen stories, cant wait to read more! :D xx
Naaww :) such a cute story.. I love it! Another one of your well writeen stories, cant wait to read more! :D xx
11/3/2012 c19 AnonymousReads
You don't even say what happens with her parents and soccer. Great story. :)
You don't even say what happens with her parents and soccer. Great story. :)
8/13/2012 c19 2Neverland.dream
AWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW! THis is like...just.. *sigh*
I feel like it's a movie or something.
Did I mention that I LOVE Dylan right from the start 'cause he's protective,s weet, funny, kind, and all. Oh, and Tyler's really over protective. So, I probably like him less than Ryan and Eddie. I don't know why I love Eddi so much even though he's rarely mentioned, but he's just so sweet and charming. :)
PLEASE WRITE MORE cliches because I'm a sucker for them. :)
Oh, this story was so well-written by the way. :) LOVE IT!
2Neverland.dreamAWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW! THis is like...just.. *sigh*
I feel like it's a movie or something.
Did I mention that I LOVE Dylan right from the start 'cause he's protective,s weet, funny, kind, and all. Oh, and Tyler's really over protective. So, I probably like him less than Ryan and Eddie. I don't know why I love Eddi so much even though he's rarely mentioned, but he's just so sweet and charming. :)
PLEASE WRITE MORE cliches because I'm a sucker for them. :)
Oh, this story was so well-written by the way. :) LOVE IT!
6/9/2012 c1 x3xJOJOx3x
So I read your story and it's a cool idea. And your able to easily like the characters. Although. I found that I didn't really get to "know" the characters and relate to them easily, not saying every story you read you should be able to relate to them. And I'm not talking about the situation. I'm not making much sense. Anyways.
I don't see a plot. At all. Um. Yea. And I would not consider this a romance story. I would say that it's a friendship story if anything. But back to the plot. Not every story has to follow the plot formula thing but I didn't find anything that would even follow a line of events.
The end was defintly rushed. I don't know if this was intended or u actually felt it but for me myself it almost felt like you were done with the story and just wante it to end. Like you were sick of it.
Anyways this is just my opinion and I do enjoy your writing style, it's fun and quirky. Please do not take any of this offensively if you do read my cmment.
x3.J
So I read your story and it's a cool idea. And your able to easily like the characters. Although. I found that I didn't really get to "know" the characters and relate to them easily, not saying every story you read you should be able to relate to them. And I'm not talking about the situation. I'm not making much sense. Anyways.
I don't see a plot. At all. Um. Yea. And I would not consider this a romance story. I would say that it's a friendship story if anything. But back to the plot. Not every story has to follow the plot formula thing but I didn't find anything that would even follow a line of events.
The end was defintly rushed. I don't know if this was intended or u actually felt it but for me myself it almost felt like you were done with the story and just wante it to end. Like you were sick of it.
Anyways this is just my opinion and I do enjoy your writing style, it's fun and quirky. Please do not take any of this offensively if you do read my cmment.
x3.J